CẮP SÁCH GIẢI NGỐ IELTS FT. SIÊU SAO Hoang Minh Thong
Ụa mọi người ơi, bữa h mọi người dằn vặt mị chuyện gì có nhớ kooooo? Ngoài sự vụ ông-chủ-nhà (tạm thông báo, đã thu câu hỏi, giờ chỉ còn chờ ông chủ nhà travel về thôi), mị còn bị dằn vặt các thể loại câu hỏi hàn lâm như thi ai-eo. Mà hỡi ôi, đời mị có thi ai-eo bao h. Có chăng sau này phải vượt biên qua nhà người anh em thiện lành cà-ná-đà thì may ra phải thi. Nhưng hiện giờ chắc chưa đâu, nên có biết gì mà đua chen với thiên hạ đầy rẫy cao nhân ai-eo 8, 9 chấm đồ.
NHƯNG! Đã có anh hùng phi tới giải cứu mị rồi các bạn ạ!!! Mị đã nhá hàng từ khi còn 25k subs đó haha, rằng một ngày đẹp trời mị sẽ lôi bạn Thông lẫy lừng ra phỏng vấn, "Toán 05-08 Phổ Thông Năng Khiếu, [...] siêu xịn với 8.5 overall (R9, L9, S8, W8.5), giảng viên trường ĐH Khoa Học Xã Hội - Nhân Văn, là thủ khoa khoa Quan Hệ Quốc Tế trước đó sau khi đã dằn túi giải 3 HSG Quốc Gia môn Văn năm 12. Dù từng đạt HCB giải Toán quốc tế tại Singapore năm lớp 10!"
And again, mị ko có cổ phần gì trong EdSpace shinh đẹp đúng chất learning space của bạn Thông đâu. Mị chỉ là cô gái PR dạo cho những người, những thứ mị thấy chất chơi. (Cũng có nhiều emails tới mời mị hợp tác PR sản phẩm, sponsor các kiểu mà mị ko có rảnh làm chuyện mị ko biết, cũng ko có thời gian tìm hiểu chuyện người ta, nên bye).
Nói chung, đây là là một post thu thập câu hỏi cho chuyên gia ai-eo trả lời, còn mị ngồi nghe phụ họa mua vui thôi hihi. Các bạn có thắc mắc gì về ai-eo thì cứ comment xuống, mị sẽ đọc và lọc rồi phỏng vấn bạn Thông nha. Mong đó sẽ là clip sâu sát ai-eo, giải đáp hết vấn vương, để các bạn chỉ cần tập trung vào học đúng hướng thôi ha (dù học sai thì vẫn thấm đc ít nha, còn hơn ko học).
Dài dòng quạ. Vậy nha!
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NÂNG CẤP TỪ WRITING B2 (6.5 IELTS) LÊN C2 (8.5+ IELTS)
Hôm nay chúng mình sẽ chia sẻ một xíu về writing để "đổi món" nhen. Đây là một bài viết của một bạn học viên ở EdSpace (trình độ Keystones 2), và được hướng dẫn để chỉnh sửa, hoàn thiện.
Đề bài lấy từ sách The Cambridge Official Guide to IELTS, Practice Test 05 với nội dung sau:
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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
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Đây là bài viết gốc của bạn học viên:
In the modern world, it is an ugly truth that we are being watched by advance technology. Although some people have concern towards the drawback of monitoring system, I personally support its positive side and agree with those who think such technologies are far more benefits.
Those who oppose the surveillance technologies may argue that such systems infringe personal freedom. Since our every moment is being tracked, we may feel uneasy and even insecure sometimes. For instance, when we go shopping, there are multiple cameras installed by the owners are recording our every movement. Additionally, we may feel uncomfortable as we do not know what will they do with those recording. As a result, some people do not prefer to enjoy their leisure time at public places as they used to do in the past.
However, I believe the monitoring innovation, like other technology, also brings endless benefits to our daily life. One of the most significant benefits is that it helps strengthens our security system. For example, unlike a few decades ago we are now able to use the CCTV footage to catch criminals and support the crime investigation. Thus this not only allows us to speed up the investigation process but also makes the trial more efficiently. Furthermore, we can get immediate medical aid if someone is in trouble. In the past year, thanks to the efficient surveillance system setup on the expressway, control center in Ho Chi Minh provided timely support for a number of accidents and save many lives.
In conclusion, despite the arguments against the digital monitoring system, I strongly believe that its advantages outweighs the disadvantages as it makes our day-to-day more secure and boost our security system.
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Có thể thấy, bạn học viên đã trả lời khá tốt câu hỏi với các luận điểm liên quan. Mỗi luận điểm đã có sử dụng luận cứ và luận chứng. Từ vựng và cấu trúc câu linh hoạt và đa dạng. Tuy vậy, bài viết vẫn có nhiều điểm có thể cải thiện:
- Sắp xếp lại ý tưởng để có mạch logic tuyến tính (linearity - đặc trưng của tiếng Anh - EdSpace sẽ chia sẻ trong notes sau về tư duy ngôn ngữ trong tiếng Anh).
- Tách đoạn để đảm bảo thao tác phát triển lập luận học thuật: Argument development, với mỗi đoạn tập trung vào một central idea.
- Cải thiện từ dùng cho tự nhiên với văn phong học thuật tiếng Anh. Một số từ đang được sử dụng theo logic "dịch Việt - Anh" nên sẽ khó hiểu với ngườ bản xứ.
- Chỉnh sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (bài viết gặp khá nhiều vấn đề ngữ pháp phổ biến của học viên người Việt).
Trong hình là bài viết được EdSpace và bạn cùng chỉnh sửa, phát triển dựa trên cấu tứ & lập luận của chính bạn học viên.
Bài viết đầu tiên được Cambridge Write & Improve (*) chấm điểm B2, và bài viết revised được chấm điểm C2+ (tương đương trình độ proficiency & native).
Các bạn có muốn đọc nhiều bài theo thể loại này không hen? Comment cho EdSpace biết với nhé. Nếu có nhiều bạn thích đọc thì EdSpace sẽ chăm chỉ và có động lực viết & chia sẻ thể loại này hơn với các bạn ^^
Ghi chú:
(*)Cambridge Write & Improve: là một hệ thống Online System của Cambridge English giúp bạn luyện tập writing - EdSpace cũng sẽ có một bài chia sẻ về công cụ tuyệt vời này sớm đến các bạn.
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BUDGET 2014 : WISH LIST, EXPECTATION & STOCKS PLAY- by Dr. Nazri Khan.
As in the past, we generally expect a post-budget rally with FBMKLCI to trend towards 1850 levels after Budget 2014. We expect budget measures to arrest competitiveness and improve public finance to attract more investors confidence and foreign fund inflows back to Malaysia.
1. Generally, Budget 2014 should spur local market sentiment by introducing tough unpopular bold measures to boost trade competitiveness, improve fiscal credibility, address the recent downgrade by sovereign credit rating (such as Fitch Ratings) and encouraging stronger private sector participation to boost economic growth.
2. We expect Budget 2014 to focus on the implementation of subsidy rationalization programme (SRP), the implementation of services tax (GST) and extension of BR1M for the low income group.
3. Generally, investors do not believe there will be significant Corporate and Personal Income Taxes cut due to government fiscal constraint but more incentives will be given to lower income groups using a very focus and targeted approach.
4. As in the past, Budget 2014 should benefit construction sectors (especially those with low import content and high multiplier project owner). Higher multiplier such as MRT circle line 2 and 3, Southern Double Tracking and even the proposed Kuching-KK Pan Borneo Highway may kick-start but big ticket high import items like Kuala Lumpur-Singapore High Speed Rail and third interchange linking Johor and Singapore could be delayed.
5. As stated in General Election manifesto, there is a real possibility, Budget 2014 may launch National Healthcare Project (something like Australia's Medicare System and UK NHS) that will provide every Malaysian with access to quality healthcare. Healthcare stocks such as IHH, KPJ and TMC Life should benefit. Further, using Budget 2013 trend, Budget 2014 should again promote local tourism sector which means healthcare sector via medical tourism again will benefit.
6. The implementation of GST should benefit software providers. Stocks like DKSH, Censof and MyEG should win contracts while telcos that have been paying govt sales tax can now shift the tax burden to customers under GST. Hence, all three telcos Maxis, Axiata and DiGi will benefit.
7. Mass market consumer stocks (such as AEON and Parkson) however should benefit from government low income incentives such as higher BR1M, higher salary to qualify for BR1M (maybe raise to RM4000-RM5000 from currently RM3000), more KR1M (Kedai Rakyat 1 Malaysia) and cheaper house from affordable PR1MA homes.
8. Budget 2014 may grant more tax exemptions for hybrid and electric cars to encourage the usage of fuel efficient vehicles. This should benefit foreign hybrid cars markers such as Honda, Volskwagen, Toyota and Nissan.
9. Due to government focus on Islamic Finance, Takaful industry players should get more added incentives in 2014 to encourage bigger market share and more protection among Malaysian. Stocks going big into Takaful such as Takaful Malaysia, Allianz and MAA may benefit.
10. Due to Subsidy Rationalisation Programme (SRP), Budget 2014 should see more subsidy cuts which includes more increase in fuel prices (possibly additional 10 to 20 cents), more increase in gas & electricty power tariff as well as hikes in sugar prices. Such moves should generally be negative for consumer/glove stocks (retailers like Nestle, Amway and Dutchlady & gloves such as Hartalega, Kossan, Supermax who use gas and raw materials) while positive for utilities stocks such as Tenaga, YTLPower and GasMsia (due to lower inputs, more efficient energy consumption and better earning visibility).
11. Budget 2014 should impose higher sin tax to boost government revenue. Tobacco players such as BAT and JT International and possibly brewery such as Carlsberg and Guinness and even gaming players such as Genting and BJToto earning are expected to contract. Bear in mind, there is no tax hike for gaming counters since 1998, no take hike for brewery since 2007 and no take hike for cigarettes since 2010. Perhaps, there will be 3 cents extra tax per cigarrete stick and RM1.00 extra duties per litre of beer.
12. For Budget 2014, we believe banks and properties could be mildly affected by more government properties-cool-down and bad-debt-measures (involving house, property, automotive and personal loans). Softer retail/corporate loans are therefore expected due to higher stamp duty, foreign cap, tougher RPGT (real properties gains tax) and higher loan-to-value (LTV) ratio for property purchases and shorter the personal financing tenure.
13. Government will strive for Marhaen Budget (Rakyat) which generally should aims for :
(i) Close To Free Education - free high quality education for all citizens
(ii) Close To Free Healthcare - affordable and easy accessible quality medical care to all, rich
and poor alike
(iii) Affordable Housing - cheaper and comfortable for majority rakyat
(iv) Efficient Public transport - safer, cheaper, more efficient, reliable and comfortable for majority rakyat
(v) Security for citizens and their families with an accepted (perceived or otherwise) low crime rate.
14. Government will use creative ways to boost revenue without burdening rakyat. These may includes :
(i) Reduce foreign tax incentives - Remove tax incentives to foreign firms operating in this country which has low multiplier effect on economy (beverage, gaming & brewery).
(ii) Auction land - Government land should be auctioned to the highest bidder to gain maximum income in development of Government’s land
(iii) Auction licences - Licences for telco and television rights can also be auctioned to the highest bidder after a shorter fixed period to get more revenue
(iv) Sell concessions - government must not give companies (whether GLC or not) rights to operate a project (eg. power plant/highways for free)
(v) Curb smuggling - government should spend more on enforcement to reduce money lost on smuggled items especially on cigarettes, beers, petrol and rice
(vi) Cut procurement bureaucracy and costs - the Government must spend more to reduce bureaucratic tape especially in procurement so that higher saving can be made on resources and time awarding the contract
(vii) Reduce subsidising the rich corporate player - the government should overhaul and reduce subsidies for rich companies such as foreign automatives and IPP which benefit more than the rakyat
(vii) Impose tax on high end asset class - capital gains tax should be imposed more on high end income eg. gains from investments, property, antique asset sales, bond and stock markets.
15. Last but not least, oil and gas stocks should get positive catalyst. Due to depleting oil reserves, we expect government to encourage more participation in the downstream O&G industry which may include huge investment tax allowance for refinery activities to catalyse the downstream segment. This will also attract investors to participate in Pengerang Integrated Petroleum Complex to ensure its successful take-off. Petronas linked stocks such as Petronas Chemicals, Sapura Kencana, Uzma, Deleum, Perisai and others should benefit.
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