486團購 台北總公司 誠徵 公司助理 無經驗可
歡迎應屆畢業生，男生需役畢。試用期四個月 薪資30000。
預計上班日，解封後。
有熱誠、肯吃苦肯認真學習，有創意，個性要活潑大方的。
486團購是一間強力行銷的公司，無論職務，所有同事都會以影音、照片的方式推廣與行銷產品，如果對於被拍攝無法接受，請不要來應徵。
請錄90秒自我介紹影片，將影片上傳到YOUTUBE(隱私設定知道連結才看的到)，把連結連同你的履歷以及臉書網址一起寄给我。
自我介紹請說明你的本質學能專長，不要浪費時間講你的英文名你的興趣，我一點都不想知道這些。你擅長什麼，你厲害的是什麼，你會的是什麼。
寄出履歷前，請先確認下面幾件事情都準備了
一、自我介紹影片的YT連結（90秒內，請勿直接寄影片檔案）
二、附上您臉書連結
●資料請Mail： 486[email protected]
標題格式： 應徵 助理 姓名/ 電話
三、履歷請在最晚7/30前寄出。
●工作地點：台北總公司(民生東路三段113巷6弄21號)
●上班時間：0930 - 1730
每月會有一至二天需要週六或日值班，當天假改到下周五補休。（同樣週休二日）
●公司福利 有星號表示該福利需工作滿一年才享有：
1.勞健保
2.★結婚禮金-隨年資，最高一個月薪資
3.★喪葬儀-最高7000元
4.★生育禮金-最高80000元
未滿一年同仁，禮金1萬元。
滿一年未滿二年，禮金2萬。
滿兩年未滿4年禮金4萬。
滿4年以上 8萬元。
5.★租屋津貼一年24000元
6.★育嬰津貼一年24000元 - 補助到高中畢業
7.★滿一年者得到國泰健檢中心全身詳細健康檢查。兩年以上配偶公司也全額補助。
8.中秋、端午不發粽子月餅，直接發半個月薪資
9.年終獎金一個月（全年共14個月薪水）
10.同仁分紅
11.出國旅遊
12.生病住院全額補助單人房費用。
13.父母、孩子生病住院若無保險可申請，公司全額補助單人房費用。
14.中午員工餐提供
我是應屆畢業生英文 在 Re: [履歷] 應屆畢業生英文自傳求批- 看板Salary 的推薦與評價
※ 引述《a765112223 (芹菜)》之銘言：
整體文法用字都有待加強
但我沒有全部改出來 只針對邏輯跟內容上的問題做評論
(如果有不對的地方 也歡迎板上的朋友提出意見)
: Extends the deep respect to your industrious work, even you are very busy.
: Thanks to glance through my material. And hoped that it can open an
: opportunity and the success gate for me.
1. 以上整段全刪 客套話不用寫在求職自傳上
: My name is ooxx, Betty is my English name. I do a Master’s. degree
2. 姓名這兩句也刪 履歷一開頭就有你的姓名 不須贅述
3. Master's.(為什麼會有點?) degree 請改成 master's degree
只有當指特定的碩士學位 如M.B.A. 才會用大寫
: in finance at National oo University and research on Fixed-Income
: security. The topic of my paper is ‘Information uncertainty and corporation
: bonds’ liquidity’. I choose to research fixed-income because its low
: volatility and it can take stable income. I believe that it will be helpful
: not only for my work in the future but my financial planning.
4. paper改成thesis
5. 這段看不出來你的碩士論文/學位跟應徵金融業儲幹有甚麼關係
: I learned to be independent and helped to take care of my younger brother
: when I was a child. It makes me become a thoughtful, reliable, and
: down-to-earth person. That’s why I always be the leader in many groups.
6. 照顧家人跟成為團隊領導的關係是？
7. 如果你要用always be the leader in groups, 那理論上下一段你要提出非常強的
論述去證明這句話
: In 2010, I entered a contest which named World Economic Outlook Essay
: Competition with my friends. We had to organize three English papers and an
: English article in three hours, then presented them to judges. I used topics
: and abstracts of those paper to know the contest and let my teammates connect
: to the article. We spent two hours to organize them, and different from other
: teams we have more time to do analysis. We not only presented the information
: of those material but elaborate our conclusions. Then we got a silver medal.
8. 這段是強調競賽的經驗 我會建議你用條列法舉出重點(成果/負責工作/能力培養)
而不是過程流水帳
例如: Winning the silver medal in World Economic Outlook Essay
Competition in 2010, responsible for xxxxxx, showing that I am
capable of doing xxxxxxxx
: During the institute, because of classmates’ reliance and professors’
: recognition I continue to hold the leader of the class when reelected, even
: been picked for assistant of EMBA program to solve all of those students’
: problems. Of all assistant, they most favorite me. Whenever they need help,
: thy always find me to help deal. I'm not just an assistant, but their
: secretary.
9. 這段是研究所打工經驗(?) 建議格式如上段列成第二點
10. 結論收在 I am not just an assistant but their secretary
個人覺得非常怪(至少從你敘述的方式跟金融業儲幹連不起來)
: I also be administrative assistant in department of finance general office.
: Due to strong sense of responsibility, I don’t just finish my job, every
: time they have many works to do, I’m always ready to help to relieve their
: heavy workload. They tell me that I’m the most proactive assistant. For this
: reason I’ve worked here more than one year.
11. 建議格式如前列成第三點
12. proactive is a good term to be used in a CV, but I don't see you address
it in a reasonable way, I only see you emphasise that you are ready to
work overtime (which is very different from being proactive).
: Volleyball’s group mentality is the reason that I'm fanatic about this
: sport. Fighting with teammates and sharing the honor to each other are
: wonderful things for me. In college, I’ve been an event planner for annually
: beach volleyball activity many times. When I had different thinking from
: others, I tried to stand in others’ shoes and ask seniors for suggestions in
: order to solve the problem and make the following work be carried on
: smoothly.
13. 社團活動經驗 建議下個標題跟先前工作實務經驗作區隔 不然延續前段很不搭
14. 這段敘述中 我看不到任何"實例"去論述你具備溝通不同意見的能力
在履歷自傳上很重要的原則是，你宣稱自己有這項能力，都應該要拿得出
一個甚至更多的例子
: With my great specialized knowledge of finance and highly proactive, I am
: confident that I will fit management associate. It's been said, ‘Where there
: ’s a will, there’s the way!’ I believe that pressure can make me grow up,
: so I’m not afraid of meeting challenge. China Development Financial Holdings
: gives good opportunity and a series of well-designed training sessions to
: make freshmen become an excellent MA. Wish you can give me a chance to prove
: it. I am eager to be one of the programmers and I will pay attention to your
: firm's development as always, and express my sincerest wish.
15. Great specialized knowledge? 如果履歷有附上數篇得獎論文的話我才會這樣寫
16. 後面客套話我不會加 除非這些客套話可以增強對方對我在能力上的印象
--
※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 1.162.12.123
※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Salary/M.1428149109.A.932.html
... <看更多>