【I think I’m good enough to get a promotion.】
連假後第一天工作日,來聊聊升遷小故事
升不上去到底哪裡出了錯?
以下為 Sonny 老師第一視角撰寫
Sonny老師的翻譯&教學札記
(故事經歷已經當事人同意後分享)
-
你知道英文寫作的好壞
可能影響你的職涯甚至人生嗎?
去年有位中階主管來找我求救
他在公司的績效很不錯
工作態度積極、待人客氣和善
但申請了很多次升遷或外派
都屢屢碰壁
他說高階主管全是英語人士
懷疑自己的溝通是不是出了問題
我聽完馬上就跟他說:
可以借我看看你寫的 e-mail 嗎?
不看則已,一看差點昏去(台語)
申請升遷的那篇 e-mail 破綻百出
而且 1️⃣ 第一句就有很大的問題:
I think I’m good enough to get a promotion.
除了信件沒有適當的開頭之外
怎麼會用這麼直接的語氣「要求」升遷呢?
於是我開始跟他講解正式信件
寫作時的原則和概念
請他盡量使用:
This letter is to request a promotion from my current role of ______ to the open role of ______. 這樣的句型和語氣
2️⃣ 第二個比較大的問題
是他雖然有良好的績效和表現
卻沒有具體、量化地描述出來
只寫了:
My excellent performance has increased sales since 2018.
於是我建議他改成:
During the past three years, I have boosted product sales by 12%, trained 15 junior employees, and saved departmental cost by 10%.
用「平行結構」(parallelism) 的方式
把自己成就的細節一一描述出來
3️⃣ 最後,他的信件用 Best 來結尾
稍嫌不夠正式
我建議他改成 Sincerely
向他講解完所有信件細節後
我請他下一封 promotion request 就這樣寫
然後祝他好運
就在上週
我收到了他的感謝信
說成功拿到了外派美國的高階職位
負責面試的主管還跟他說
他的 e-mail 寫得很不錯
這讓我覺得非常開心
果然不好的寫作就像一塊 #絆腳石
好的寫作卻像一塊 #敲門磚
可以幫你開啟無限的機會
-
Sonny 老師是台灣浩首席筆譯老師
7 年來,我一路看著老師
如何投入研發心力
打造台灣同學的優質英文寫作課程
老師最近和 Hahow 好學校
合作了「寫作學習計畫」
讓同學到 10/16 23:59 前
都能享 85 折優惠價格
真心大推給想學好英文寫作的你:
https://hahow.in/cr/sonny-eng-writing2
#email真的很重要
#聽說筆譯班的大家都被噹過一波🤫
#不斷注意細節是進步的關鍵
同時也有4部Youtube影片,追蹤數超過58萬的網紅madebyaya,也在其Youtube影片中提到,Turning BedSheets Into Clothes Easy Sewing💐sustainable fashion- How to Sew / Make Cotton Linen Dress - DIY Oversized Babydoll Dress・・・https://youtu.b...
「letter of request」的推薦目錄:
- 關於letter of request 在 Facebook 的精選貼文
- 關於letter of request 在 Facebook 的最佳解答
- 關於letter of request 在 Goodbye HK, Hello UK Facebook 的最佳貼文
- 關於letter of request 在 madebyaya Youtube 的最佳解答
- 關於letter of request 在 Dan Lok Youtube 的精選貼文
- 關於letter of request 在 teraminato Youtube 的最佳解答
- 關於letter of request 在 Request Letter Template - Pinterest 的評價
letter of request 在 Facebook 的最佳解答
我這個禮拜收到了美國國會兩位議員的兩面美國旗。 我很高興能夠與你們分享美國對台灣的支持和讚賞!
美國在六月底捐給台灣寶貴的疫苗,我因為美國的慈善行為和台灣人的感激之情所感動。 我決定寫信給50 多名國會議員,每封信都包含 400 多條來自台灣人自己的感謝信息。 好幾個國會會員收到此封信而兩位已經回答了寄給我一個美國旗. 這些美國旗為什麼特別呢?這些美國旗都飄揚在美國國會大廈來紀念台灣和美台關係。
這篇文章中的照片來自一面美國旗,另一面美國旗下個禮拜可以開箱給你們看。 我計劃在九月將這些旗幟運送到台灣,我計畫把兩面美國旗捐贈給台灣其中一個博物館、一個城市政府地方或任何其他合適的地方,並且會像我一樣重視它。
感謝你們所有的支持,尤其是我的 YouTube 頻道成員,感謝你們慷慨的捐款,這些捐款幫助我支付了所有國會議員的寫作費用,以及將國旗運往各州和台灣的費用。也非常感謝我媽媽的協助,因為她我才能夠做得到這件事.
文件 1:
美利堅合眾國國旗 - 茲證明隨附的旗幟於 2021 年 7 月 27 日應美國參議員邁克爾·李 (Micheal S. Lee) 閣下的要求懸掛在美國國會大廈上空。
這一請求是為 Logan D. Beck (小貝)提出的,以紀念台灣在 2021 年 6 月 20 日對美國慷慨捐贈疫苗的感激之情。
文件 2:
親愛的小貝,
祝賀你們為加強美國與台灣之間的關係所做的工作。 您的工作改善了與您同住的人的生活,也改善了受益於與台灣牢固關係的美國人的生活。 這一切就證明了您的辛勤工作、領導能力和服務。 像你這樣的人讓猶他州和整個美國變得非凡。
保持良好的工作! 我毫不懷疑你會在未來幾年對我們偉大的國家和民族產生影響。 再次祝賀你繼續取得的成就。
溫暖的問候,
邁克爾·李
美國參議員
This week I received two flags from two members of the United States Congress. I’m very thrilled to be able to share with you a token of America support and appreciation for Taiwan!
After the United States donated vaccines to Taiwan in late June I was moved by the charitable act of the United States and the gratitude shown by the Taiwanese. I decided to write over 50 members of Congress, each letter containing over 400 messages of gratitude from the Taiwanese themselves. In return two answered back by sending a United States flag that was specially flown over the United States Capitol in honor of Taiwan and the US Taiwan relationship.
The photos in this post are from one flag, the other flag should be ready to show you by next week. I plan to ship these flags to Taiwan in September and plan to donate them to a museum, Government building or any other place that is suitable and would value it as much as I do.
That for all your support, especially my YouTube channel members for you generous donations that helped me pay for writing all of the members of Congress and for getting the flags shipped across states and to Taiwan. Also, big thanks to my Mom for assisting my in the ambitious project, without her help this couldn’t have been accomplished.
Letter 1:
The Flag of the United States of America - This is to certify that the accompanying flag was flown over the United States Capitol on July 27, 2021 at the request of the Honorable Micheal S. Lee, United States Senator.
This request was made for Logan D. Beck in honor of Taiwan gratitude for the United States generous donation of vaccines on June 20, 2021.
Letter 2:
Dear Logan,
Congratulations on your work strengthening the relationship between the United States and Taiwan. Your work has improved the lives of those you live with as well as the lives of Americans who benefit from a strong relationship with Taiwan. This achievement is a testament to your hard work, leadership and service. People like you make Utah, and the United States at large, remarkable.
Keep up the good work! I have no doubt you will make an impact on our great state and nation for years to come. Congratulations again on all you continue to accomplish.
Warm regards,
Michael S. Lee
United States Senator
letter of request 在 Goodbye HK, Hello UK Facebook 的最佳貼文
點解唔訪問埋?
亞洲互聯網聯盟Asia Internet Coalition嘅會員係包括Apple, facebook, Google, Twitter, Expedia, Amazon, LINE, Linkedin, Rakuten, SAP, Airbnb, Grab, Yahoo, Booking .com, Cloudflare。剩係問FB、Twitter同Google回應點夠㗎?應該問埋Apple同埋其他囉...
Apple、Linkedin同其他食賣玩嗰啲都唔諗喇,唔知香港有幾多個公私營企業係用SAP呢個商業系統呢?如果真係"would be to refrain from investing and offering the services in Hong Kong.”,唔知要用幾多時間同金錢換系統呢?
Anyway,越南係FB同Google响南亞最賺錢嘅市場,上年年尾好似幾配合符合當地政府法律...「雖然有壓力限制更多內容....不過呢...盡量會繼續為當地人提供服務」
"Over the past few months, we've faced additional pressure from the government of Vietnam to restrict more content, however, we will do everything we can to ensure that our services remain available so people can continue to express themselves."
Patreon原文:
亞洲互聯網聯盟?無水晶球的純個人睇法
https://bit.ly/2V5BJyF
2020年12月BBC越南舊聞:
Vietnam: Facebook and Google 'complicit' in censorship
https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-asia-55140857
亞洲互聯網聯盟信件原文:
AIC Submits Industry Letter on the Proposed Amendments to Hong Kong’s Personal Data (Privacy) Ordinance to PCPD (June 2021)
https://aicasia.org/wp-content/uploads/2021/07/Industry-Response-on-the-Proposed-Amendments-to-Hong-Kongs-Personal-Data-Privacy-Ordinance-and-Request-for-Virtual-Meeting.pdf
📢乞食廣告:文字、時間與心血有價
🥣每日更新乞兒兜:
https://www.patreon.com/goodbyehkhellouk
最近更新:
亞洲互聯網聯盟?無水晶球的純個人睇法
https://bit.ly/2V5BJyF
客席作者米迦文章:
點解新媒體(一)從傳統媒體到新媒體
https://bit.ly/3ykvMfG
來自加拿大,羅馬尼亞裔加華裔,英國網球歷史新星
https://bit.ly/3jF3Wqs
疫苗以外,英國首相的另一賭注:OneWeb衛星計劃
https://bit.ly/3haDUJU
letter of request 在 madebyaya Youtube 的最佳解答
Turning BedSheets Into Clothes Easy Sewing💐sustainable fashion- How to Sew / Make Cotton Linen Dress -
DIY Oversized Babydoll Dress・・・https://youtu.be/mNCKwXH-qT4
Thanks for your request🌼
Thank you so much for watching\♥︎/
If you enjoyed please leave a LIKE , SHARE this video👍
and Please subscribe to my channel for more videos💓☺️🙏
Have a lovely day( ´◡` )❃・゚
Sewing Tutorial // Step by Step Tutorial // Sewing Project //
ハンドメイド / ソーイング / 手作り / ミシン / 手芸 / お裁縫 DIY チュートリアル ✂️
オーバーサイズ ワンピ / 切り替えワンピース / リネンワンピースの作り方(・◡・)•*¨*•.¸
핸드메이드 소잉 바느질 옷 만들기 DIY + 린넨 원피스 만들기✧˖°
봄 여름 🌷 체크 원피스 만드는 법 ✂️ 패션디자인
手作教學 / 手作服 ✂️ 衣服自己做 / 縫製工藝 / 分享教学 / 初學者衣車 / 製作方法 / 自己製作 / 簡單流行大人服服裝製作 / 簡單自製 / 簡單手作 :))
Cómo hacer un vestido Babydoll ✂️ Cómo coser un Vestido Babydoll
DIY Costura ♡ DIY Tutorial y patrones Vestido de Mujer
Tumblr : http://whateverbebe.tumblr.com
Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/a.y.a__
Twitter : https://twitter.com/madebyaya
Facebook : https://www.facebook.com/itsmadebyaya/
my another channel : https://is.gd/gHamjE
✂️Sewing Machine✂️
black one▷http://goo.gl/lpi2sa
JANOME HS-70
Serger▷baby lock
----------♫♫♫----------
°Playdate by The Great North Sound Society
°Hiiltop by Dan Lebowitz
°Letter To Natalie by The Great North Sound Society
°Hickory Hollow by Dan Lebowitz
°Pink Horizon by Chris Haugen
°Terrier Waltz by Nat Keefe with The Bow Ties
°Sweet Release by Dan Lebowitz
#Upcycle #Sustainable #Sewing
letter of request 在 Dan Lok Youtube 的精選貼文
Watch this video to the end to discover 3 weird and unconventional ways of staying married without killing each other. In it, you’ll discover an Uber driver’s secrets to have a happy marriage.
Enjoyed this video? Click here to watch how to overcome sexual temptation in a relationship: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=onX4bLDeQSU
★☆★BONUS FOR A LIMITED TIME★☆★
You can download Dan Lok's best-selling book F.U. Money for FREE: http://staymarried.danlok.link
★☆★ SUBSCRIBE TO DAN'S YOUTUBE CHANNEL NOW ★☆★
https://www.youtube.com/user/vanentrepreneurgroup?sub_confirmation=1
Check out these Top Trending Playlist:
1.) How to Sell High Ticket Products & Services: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLEmTTOfet46PlgDZSSo-gxM8ahZ9RtNQE
2.) The Art of High Ticket Sales - https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLEmTTOfet46NufVkPfYhpUJAD1OBoQEEd
3.) Millionaire Mindset - https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLEmTTOfet46O591glMGzRMoHaIJB-bQiq
Dan Lok, a.k.a. The King of High-Ticket Sales is one of the highest-paid and most respected consultants in the luxury and “high-ticket” space.
Dan is the creator of High-Ticket Millions Methodology™, the world's most advanced system for getting high-end clients and commanding high fees with no resistance.
Dan works exclusively with coaches, consultants, thought leaders and other service professionals who want a more sustainable, leveraged lifestyle and business through High-Ticket programs and Equity Income.
Dan is one of the rare keynote speakers and business consultants that actually owns a portfolio of highly profitable business ventures.
Not only he is a two times TEDx opening speaker, he's also an international best-selling author of over 12 books and the host of Shoulders of Titans show.
Dan's availability is extremely limited. As such, he's very selective and he is expensive (although it will be FAR less expensive than staying where you are).
Many of his clients are seeing a positive return on their investments in days, not months.
But if you think your business might benefit from one-on-one interaction with Dan, visit http://danlok.com
★☆★ WANT TO OWN DAN'S BOOKS? ★☆★
http://www.amazon.com/Dan-Lok/e/B002BLXW1K
★☆★ NEED SOLID ADVICE? ★☆★
Request a call with Dan:
https://clarity.fm/danlok
★☆★ CONNECT WITH DAN ON SOCIAL MEDIA ★☆★
Blog: http://www.danlok.com/blog/
Podcast: http://www.shouldersoftitans.com/
Twitter: https://twitter.com/danthemanlok
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/danlok/
YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/user/vanentrepreneurgroup
Linkedin: https://www.linkedin.com/in/danlok
Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/Dan-Lok/e/B002BLXW1K
This video is about How To Stay Married Without Killing Each Other
https://youtu.be/eHEZUMChUP4
https://youtu.be/eHEZUMChUP4
letter of request 在 teraminato Youtube 的最佳解答
メッセージサンキュ I have continued to receive a request from a few years ago. "Please. You, please read my letter," it is, such as "I want you to answer my question." I intend to read the line talk. I would like to thank everyone of the message. Tuc is flavored salami, which is gift from a friend who is in France. It Yummy. Gummy candy Yummy of Tamagoyaki (Japanese omelet). I would like to thank everyone and sweets manufacturer.
説明はブログへhttp://teraminato.apap.co4.jp/2016/01/blog-post_23.html
letter of request 在 Request Letter Template - Pinterest 的推薦與評價
Request Letter Template - Free Word Templates · By a request letter template, it is designed to request the recipient to do something stated in the letter. By ... ... <看更多>