【寫文章和作曲一樣,節奏決定優劣】
// 我有好一些小學的學生,他們不大會犯文法錯誤,寫出來的英文大致能叫人明白,但他們家長仍然會讓我和他們上堂,希望子女可以有更高的欣賞語文之美的能力,寫出來的文章內容更豐富、文筆更優美。
昨天和這班高小的同學上課,學生問你一個問題,我覺得很發人深省:描寫主角鬼鬼祟祟地爬入姐姐房間裏,弄壞姐姐的樂器時,sneaky 明明是鬼鬼祟祟的意思,surreptitiously 也是鬼鬼祟祟的意思,為什麼要用 surreptitiously 這個字代替 sneaky 呢?
我的解釋是這樣,surreptitious 這個字有四個音節,把鬼祟地爬行的感覺更慢條斯理地表達出來,拉長了鬼祟地行動的過程,更能夠製造懸疑感,吸引讀者看下去,讓讀者更投入在疑惑中,着急想知道主角究竟會否在過程中被逮着呢?
學生學語文的時候一般不會把作文當成作曲一樣,但其實,好的文章和好的樂曲有異曲同工之處,好的文章,讀起來,節奏必然是恰當的,也會令人印象深刻,彷彿在聽一個引人入勝的故事一樣。
下載我親身為學生寫的範文按此連結:http://bit.ly/2S77G2p
同時也有2部Youtube影片,追蹤數超過2,620的網紅themblan,也在其Youtube影片中提到,Today I talk about how deep self-hatred can manifest into hatred of others, and how you can transform that hatred into love. ------------------------...
surreptitious 在 Justin Lim Photography Facebook 的最佳解答
"My whole ethos revolves around not "forcing" the moment. Of course I sometimes suggest locations for portraits, and make little adjustments, but it's important not to interrupt the flow of a wedding or get too intrusive. My style is to be surreptitious but always get my shots. In terms of elements I look for, I always want the backgrounds and accessories to bring the focus on a couple, rather than be a dramatic distraction. I love simple elements which bring out a natural, soft beauty." - Justin, founder of Justin Lim Photography, in a recent interview
www.justlimphoto.com
surreptitious 在 themblan Youtube 的最讚貼文
Today I talk about how deep self-hatred can manifest into hatred of others, and how you can transform that hatred into love.
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The song in my intro and outro was done by Hyper Potions, and it is called Time Trials. You can check out the full song here: https://youtu.be/mnfNWe-HHsI.
surreptitious 在 Sir.Mikey Youtube 的最佳貼文
01 - Kat's Song (ft Laura Ellis)
02 - The Streets
03 - Warming Up
04 - Lights Up, Camera Ready
05 - House On Fire (ft Laura Ellis)
06 - A Surreptitious Meeting
07 - Main Attraction
08 - Carousel
09 - Yo Ho, Me Hearties
10 - Ladies And Gents
11 - Trouble In the Streets
12 - Softly
13 - The Dark Forest (bonus track)
14 - A Knight Fantastic (bonus track)
15 - Late Night Drinks (bonus track)
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