關於 english writing格式 ，我們在網路上蒐集到這些相關的討論、資訊與評價

[專頁公告] 英文學習「生態系」更新

English Learning Ecosystem Update

As I began exploring Instagram, I struggled to find a way to deliver useful academic content. Instagram posts typically focus on images, short clips, and concise text, which are attention grabbing but not always entirely conducive to language learning. I looked over the posts of established Instagram English learning accounts, and experimented with vocabulary posts and even news posts for a couple of weeks. Not wanting to post just images, I thought about creating something new even with the rigid format of the platform.

當我開始研究怎麼用IG，我想盡了各種辦法，希望能提供大家一些實用的學術內容。 IG 的特色著重在圖片、短片以及簡潔的文字，這樣的方式雖然很容易引人注目，卻不全然有助於語言學習。我瀏覽了 IG 上英文教學網紅的貼文，並在這幾週嘗試發了一些學術單字與新聞相關的文章。我並不想只是發一些圖片，而思考著要如何在既有框架下創作一些新的東西。

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A tenet of using tech in education is to engage students with what they are familiar with, not give them an entirely new platform that is difficult to use. So, how could I create a new series of Instagram posts that is both educational and unique? I thought about my goal to disseminate academic English resources, and how I could leverage my experience as a curriculum writer and voice recording artist for public school textbooks.

一個使用科技進行教育的原則是用學生熟悉的方式與他們互動，而非用了全新的平台卻使他們難以學習。那麼，我應該如何創作獨特且具教育意義的一系列全新 IG 發文呢？我想到了我傳遞學術英文資源的目標，以及思考到該如何發揮身為教科書編輯者與音頻錄製者的經驗。

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So far, this is what I have at the moment. I will post Word of the Day (每日一詞), high frequency vocabulary words that you see in academic texts and sometimes on the news. These Tier 2 academic vocabulary words are not exclusive to a single domain and complement the theme-based approach I’ve taken with my mind-mapping vocabulary class. You can find other vocabulary learning methods here.

這是我目前所想到的內容：我會發布「每日一詞」，也就是學術文章或是新聞中有時出現的高頻字彙。這些Tier 2學術詞彙並不限於單個領域，更補充了我在心智圖詞彙攻略課程中採用的主題式學習法。你還可以在下面網站找到其他詞彙學習方法。

🎓 詞彙學習方法：http://bit.ly/2JGXKvK

In these posts, I added the pronunciation, collocation, and example sentences of each word for students. These words will be helpful to university-level students who often read academic texts and the news. Students can access them by simply clicking on the hashtag 學術英語單字.

在這些貼文中，我為學生提供了發音、搭配用法和例句。這些單字會對經常閱讀學術文章和新聞的大學程度學生有所幫助。學生只要點貼文上的＃學術英語單字即可看到貼文。

🎓 學術英文單字: https://bit.ly/3cxH091

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To help students use more precise and common academic phrases, I then added Academic Phrases (每日一句), set phrases that appear in both academic speech and writing. These phrases have varying functions from introducing a topic to comparing and contrasting ideas. There is a difference between speech and writing, so I picked words that could be used for both. If one is used only in a specific context, I will make note of it in the video recording. This series of posts will help students with language output, and can be found under the following hashtag 學術英語片語.

為了幫助學生使用更精準、更道地的常見學術用語，我們接著會進入「每日一句」，也就是在學術演說與寫作中常見的用語。這些片語具有不同的功能，範圍涵蓋介紹主題到比較、對比想法等等。而演講和寫作之間也有不同，所以我選擇了都可以使用的片語。如果只能在特定情況下使用，我會在影片中特別說明。該系列文章將會幫助學生提高語言輸出能力，可以在 # 學術英語片語找到。

🎓 學術英文片語: https://bit.ly/3aqaQcP

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Last, I will follow up with an abridged version of breaking news (時事英文) with high frequency collocations and audio recordings. This will provide students with the input of not only individual words, but how to use them in output (speech and writing) with context. While all these news posts might seem independent at first, I will eventually link and organize them by theme when there are enough posts. Along with my news class, these extra posts will help students stay aware of current events, acquire set phrases used in journalism, and develop critical thinking. These posts can currently be found under the hashtag EEL時事英文.

最後，我們會跟進精簡版的「時事英文」，其中包含高頻搭配詞與錄音資料。這些內容不僅可以提供你們輸入單字，而且可以幫助你們知道如何搭配情境輸出，再將這些內容使用在口說與寫作中。這些貼文一開始雖然看似獨立，當素材足夠後我會再將他們進行連結與整理。這些貼文和我的新聞課程將幫助學生維持對時事的敏銳度，掌握新聞中使用的固定用法，並養成批判性思維。這些貼文目前可以在 # EEL時事英文。

🎓 批判性思考問題大全: http://bit.ly/34rdtJ7

🎓 EEL時事英文: https://bit.ly/36tDusv

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There is a lot more I want to do to create an ecosystem of free academic English learning materials. I will continue modifying our post format to meet your needs, but these are my plans for Instagram thus far. Join us on our journey to make bilingual academic English resources more readily available to all! Let’s continue to learn and grow together!

建立免費的學術英文學習系統是件大工程，我會持續修改我們發文的格式以符合你們的需求與習慣，這些只是我目前 IG 學術英語學習計畫的一部分。加入我們的旅程來讓雙語的學術英文資源更加普及！讓我們一起學習與成長！

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🎓 學術英文單字: https://bit.ly/3cxH091

🎓 學術英文片語: https://bit.ly/3aqaQcP

🎓 EEL時事英文: https://bit.ly/36tDusv

🎓 批判性思考問題大全：http://bit.ly/34rdtJ7

🎓 該如何學習英文？http://bit.ly/3inxdCP

【一支小雨傘】One Little Umbrella
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我人生中的狂風暴雨，都有他打著傘陪我走過。

以前還沒嫁時，三兩頭都會被媽媽打，都是他在凌晨時分睡眼矇矓地聽我在電話中哭訴。

以前我胃痛成疾，他買了很多巧克力、麥片、胃痛藥，放在一個小包，要我帶出國。

他到現在還是一樣天天打理我的飲食。有他在，我三餐固定。我少吃蝦，因為有一次被蝦殼割傷，後來他知道了，就為我剝。

以前我問他，會不會不喜歡我當空姐。他說，他等著和我結婚能有免費機票去利物浦看球。

後來，我問他會不會不喜歡我當風水師。他說不會，他覺得很有趣，而且結合佛法來渡眾生，這樣的工作很有意義。

我能夠無顧慮地站在大眾前，因為背後一直有他......幫忙做家務。 😄

我那支影片被放在男性論壇時，我第一個想到的人就是他。

我把論壇的嘰嘰歪歪截圖發給他。他還在工作，卻立馬就打電話給我。

他電話裡頭的第一句話：「你OK嗎？」

我問他會不會不喜歡我講這類的課題，而引來這些麻煩？

他說不會，因為我是在利生，沒有在做花枝招展的事情。他也知道，我和男客人之間從不搞曖昧。

我問他如果他家人看到了，不喜歡我如此拋頭露面，引來這些男人的批評，他會不會阻止我？

他說不會，他會告訴他們我做什麼，他都知道，他都同意，叫我不要怕。

結婚前，他說過不會阻止我做我喜歡的事情。

結婚後，他依然不變初衷。

到現在，如果我有心事，無論他工作多累，他依然會半夢半醒地聽我傾訴。

我一生好像都過得很另類，很反傳統，沒有像一般新加坡女生的生活格式。我常常也覺得自己好像是個怪胎，做著別人嗤之以鼻的事。

可他從頭到尾，從來沒有嫌棄我，沒有退縮過，處處包容我，體恤我。

我問他，與我結婚會辛苦嗎？

他說，不會，我沒有發脾氣時，一切都很美好，只是我好像長不大的猴子，但這也是這婚姻的樂趣。他說幸好我們沒有孩子，要不然家裡那麽多隻猴子，我一定就是那個猴頭老大，帶著小猴子們一起瘋癲，他就會是那個厭世的爸爸。

他叫我無需拿我們的婚姻和別人比。他就是因為我不一樣，才會娶我。

這樣的婚姻，我想應該可以走很久吧～

老公，結婚十四週年快樂。❤️

01.01.2006

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In the many thunderstorms of my life, he is always with by my side with an open umbrella.

Before we got married, whenever I was thrashed by my Mum, he would always be on the other end of the line, barely awake, listening to my sobs, at midnight hours.

I used to have bad gastric bouts, so he would pack lots of chocolates, instant oats, antacids into a small pouch and tell me to bring it overseas.

Till today, he is still taking charge of my meals. With him around, I have regular meals.

I do not like to peel prawns for once, my fingers got cut by a prawn shell. So all these years, he would peel for me voluntarily.

Once I asked him, if he minded me being an air stewardess. He replied, that he was looking forward to marrying me so that he would get a free air ticket to watch his Liverpool team play.

Later on, I asked him if he minded me being a Feng Shui practitioner. He said no. He thought that it was interesting and with me combining it with Dharma, it was a meaningful job to bring hope to people.

The reason why I can stand in front of everyone without any worry is because of him.... helping out with the chores at home 😁

When that Youtube video of mine: https://youtu.be/lPH26j2XQGw, became the subject of a “heated” discussion in some men's forums, the first person I thought of was him.

I sent him screenshots of the discussion thread. He was at work yet he called me immediately.

His first words were “Are you OK?”

I asked him if he disliked the subject I spoke about in the video and attracted these troubles?

He said he did not mind because I was benefiting others, and did not behave flirtatiously in the video. He also knew there was no hanky panky between my male clients and I.

I asked him if his family got to see this video and disliked these unwanted attention, would he stop me?

He said no, and that he would explain to his family that he was aware of what I did and gave his full blessings to my work. He asked me to have no fear.

Before marriage, he told me he would not stop me from pursuing my dreams. After marriage, his words still hold true.

Till now, when I am troubled, he would still make the effort to hear me out, despite being in a drowsy state.

My whole life has been unconventional, bordering on the eccentric, unlike the lifestyle of most Singaporean ladies. I often think I am an oddball, doing things that most people would scoff at.

Yet since the beginning till now, he did not once back down, but showered me with understanding and consideration.

I ask him if being married to me was tough for him.

He said no. When I’m not in a foul temper, things are beautiful. I am like a monkey who never grows up, but this is also the uniqueness of our marriage. He said he was glad that we didn't have children. Otherwise, with so many monkeys in the home, I would be that Monkey King doing crazy things with all the little monkeys and he would be that frantic papa trying to pull everything together for a sane household.

He told me there is no need for me to compare our marriage with others'. He married me because I was different.

Well, I guess this kind of marriage can probably go a long way.

Cubby, Happy 14th Anniversary!

01.01.2006

【油管教會我的三件事】(English writing below)
The 3 Lessons Youtube Taught Me

🎉 感謝三百位天才！🎉 😁

我的頻道，在2019年12月29日大約早上十點半，達到300位訂閱。

我在今年六月做了一個極端的決定， 就是我油管頻道要每星期更新。

極端因為我每天時間都已不夠用。

但我有一個壞習慣。

一旦決定要做的事情，我會如閃電俠般地衝刺，以推土機的力量把所有的障礙都剷平。

我慶幸自己在台灣找到一位可靠的剪輯師幫忙。

如果要一手包辦，要嘛我就頭髮全部發白或英年早逝，看哪個先到。

我的頻道在2019年三月達到一百位訂閱。當時，裡頭只有過去兩年隨性般地上傳的七支影片。

每星期更新影片，在六月的最後一個星期開始。從六月到十二月，因為工作繁忙，我只錯過一週的更新。

每週更新了25支影片後，我從油管學會了三件事：

一、舊的黃金依然是黃金

是真的，單憑一支「愛瘋」也可以成立一個油管頻道。

目前在我頻道的影片，是我在2016年到2017年做的臉書直播，用蘋果手機6和6S 的前置相機拍攝。

以前我每星期做直播，累積了很多影片，只是畫質就有點「另類」了。

我曾想過用一台好相機，在一個漂亮的場景，重拍那六十多場直播，讓影片看起來更專業。

可是⋯⋯想到頭髮花白之事⋯

我每星期上傳影片，漸漸地，在六個月的時間內，流量往上爬，新的觀眾也因為油管的推薦而看到我的影片。

我的油管影片都有超過一百的流量。

有一支解析金蟾的影片有過7800的觀看率，131個讚：
https://youtu.be/dtcU9GG80wQ

另一支提到手淫如何危害財運，有過6800的觀看率和45個讚：
https://youtu.be/lPH26j2XQGw

還有一支介紹報父母恩咒的影片，有過1800的觀看率和35個讚：
https://youtu.be/x-7GPmbq5nw

目前為止，沒有人向我投訴畫質不好。我想影片內容，夾麥的收音清晰和後製特效有幫助。

很多時候，這些直播是我見了客人或收到讀者來訊提問，靈感泉源湧現時而隨想隨拍的。所以你會看到我影片的背景往往都不一樣。

如果我重拍影片，是，我可能會說得更好，但應該很難模仿當時的那股激情。

一句話：時機對的時後，不要嘰嘰歪歪，往前衝就對了。

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二、不完美也是完美的（有時）

我很執著完美。

當2019年的我看到年輕時的我在直播劈哩啪啦講一堆時，我會想⋯⋯咦，我怎麼那麼說呀⋯⋯天啊，我的臉怎麼那樣啊⋯⋯

那支金蟾的影片把我這大餅臉「完美」地呈現出來，也帶來最高的觀看率。過去一年，它也帶來很多來自新馬澳台和中國的詢問。

在我緊張著要開臉書直播談手淫時，我竟然忘了把夾麥插入手機，收音極差。我那時在星巴克，人來人往，攪拌機也正在「熱舞」。直播到一半，我緊張到忘了自己要說什麼。

我半點都不喜歡那影片，但心想，不管了，就放上去吧！那時是九月，頻道不到兩百訂閱，我心想反正沒什麼人看我影片。

結果，一位男士觀看後，因一片「熱愛」而把我影片放在男性論壇上。

二十四小時內，影片觀看率直破一千大關，也因此讓我的訂閱跨過兩百這門檻。

真的是不可思議，我竟然因為一支手淫危害財運的影片而在兩個男性論壇「爆紅」。兩個！

但我想我父母應該不會為我這「成就」而驕傲。😂

我也收到好些男性酸民因被我影片激怒而發來的留言。幸好，也有更多的男士以親身經歷而理智地支持我的說法。

在報父母恩咒的影片下方，有兩個留言給了我很大的動力：

「嗨，季謙小姐，請上傳更多影片。」
「感恩感激你循循善誘，教導我們如何通過佛法唸經、盡孝道，報答父母養育之恩。」

金玉良言：一切都是最美好的安排。

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三、焦點不在我

觀眾選擇自己想看的內容。有時，「網紅」會因為高互動率按讚率等而自滿。

但對我而言，我上傳越多影片，越覺得這些不是在為我自己做。

除了定期更新，我並沒有什麼油管策略。

有時，我也想不出什麼搶眼的標題。我讓我的剪輯師覺得縮圖要怎麼做。我沒有什麼必勝的格式來呈現我的影片，更沒有什麼相似的頻道供我參考。

我把我的經驗和與客人的交流說出來。

這些影片都是我的迷你版，在網路上授課分享。

如果你覺得受用並訂閱我的頻道，幸運的不是我。

是你，因為你認出這知識能改善你的生活品質。

人生如一場亂流，我們的情緒，遇到的人事物往往會讓我們覺得不由自主，不在自己能控制的範圍內。

當你利用這新知識來駕駛你的人生時，我很確定2020年必定會帶給你和你的家更多的快樂和收穫。

謝謝你們，天才們，發現了我，又選擇與我同行。

你讓我想成為更優秀的自己來更好地幫助們。

我也期待對你而言，我也能同樣地啟發了你們。

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🎉 Thank you to the 300 geniuses! 🎉 😁

I hit 300 subscribers on 29 December 2019, around 1030am.

One radical decision I made in June 2019 was to start weekly upload to my Youtube channel.

Radical because I was already running on a very tight time schedule every day.

But I have a bad habit.

Once my mind is set on something, I charge like the Flash, bulldozing all obstacles to make things work.

I am lucky that I found a reliable video editor in Taiwan.

If I do everything myself, my hair will turn full white or I will die young, whichever comes faster.

My channel hit 100 subscribers in March 2019, with 7 videos uploaded sporadically over a span of 2 years.

The weekly upload commenced on the last week of June. From June till now, I have only missed one week of upload due to heavy workload in December.

25 weekly videos later, these are the 3 lessons Youtube have taught me:

1) OLD CAN BE GOLD

It’s true. You can start a Youtube channel with merely an Iphone.

Currently, the videos on my channel are my FB Lives from 2016-2017, filmed with the front camera of Iphone6 and 6S.

I used to do weekly Lives back then and chalked up many videos. The resolution is funky.

I toyed with the idea of remaking all the 60 over videos, you know, with a really nice DSLR camera and in a pretty setting, so that it can look more professional.

But…the thought of my hair turning white…

So I uploaded the videos and gradually over 6 months, the views stacked up and new audience started finding me through Youtube recommendations.

All my Youtube videos has over 100 views.

One video on golden toads hit 7.8K views with 131 Likes:
https://youtu.be/dtcU9GG80wQ

Another video on how masturbation harms wealth luck has 6.8K views with 45 Likes:
https://youtu.be/lPH26j2XQGw

And this video on the mantra to repay parents has 1.8K views with 35 Likes:
https://youtu.be/x-7GPmbq5nw

No one has yet to complain of the wacky resolution. I think the content, my clear audio from a lavalier mic and the editing effects make up for it.

Most of the time, those Lives were done on the fly, after getting all fired up from a client consultation or receiving questions from my readers, so you see all these different backgrounds in my videos.

If I have to remake the videos, yes I may speak better, but I doubt I can mimic the same in-the-moment passion.

✅ When the time is right, stop fretting about the small stuff and just charge ahead.

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2) IMPERFECTION IS PERFECT (sometimes)

I am anal about being as perfect as I can.

When the 2019 me watched the younger me blabbing away in the Lives, I will be like, eeee…why did I talk like that, yucks, why did my face look like that…

That golden toad video showcased my big pancake face in its full glory…and it grossed the highest views. It also brought me a ton of inquiries from Singapore, Malaysia, Taiwan, Macau and China over the last one year.

In all my anxiety to talk about masturbation on a FB Livestream for the first time, I freaking broccoli forgot to plug in my lavalier mic. The audio was bad. I was at a Starbucks cafe. People were walking left right up down center. The blenders were on rock and roll. I forgot what I wanted to say halfway.

I didn’t like the video a single bit. But never mind, just upload. My channel had less than 200 subs at that time in September. Who cares to watch my video anyway…

Then some guy watched it and “liked” it so much that he embedded my video to a men’s forum.

Within 24 hours, the views rocketed to over 1000 and that was how I hit the 200 sub count.

Holy asparagus, I became “famous” for a video of me sprouting about Masturbation VS Wealth Luck. In TWO men’s forums.

I somehow doubt my parents will be proud of this "achievement" of mine though. 😂

There were hate comments from men who got very agitated with what I said in the video. #chillbro Thankfully, there were more rational men who supported my viewpoint with their personal experiences.

In the video on a Buddhist mantra, there were two comments that motivated me greatly:

“Hi Ms Ji Qian, please do upload more videos.”
“Thank you for your patient guidance to teach us how to be filial and repay our parents for raising us up, through the Dharma and sutra recitation.”

✅ Everything happens for a good reason. It is up to me to make it serve my interest.

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3) IT’S NOT ABOUT ME

People choose the content they want to watch. Sometimes "influencers" get carried away when they see their engagement shoot up.

But for me, the more videos I upload, the more I feel I am not doing it for myself.

Apart from consistent uploads, I do not have any strategy for Youtube.

I sometimes struggle to think of eye-catching titles. I let my video editor decides how he wants to do the thumbnails. I have no winning format to present my videos. There is no other similar Youtube channel for me to refer to.

I just speak what I know from first-hand experience and client interactions.

All these videos are my different mini-me, teaching and sharing online.

If you find it useful and subscribe to my channel, it isn’t me that is lucky.

It is YOU. Because you recognise that this knowledge can improve the quality of your life.

Life is a turbulence of emotions and events and it can often feel that we are not in control.

When you are able to steer your life better with this new knowledge in hand, I'm very sure that 2020 will be happy and rewarding for you and your family.

Thank you, genius, for discovering me and staying with me.

You make me want to be a finer version of myself to help you better.

I hope I have the same impact on you too. ❤️

#DSE #DSE英文 #2021DSE
今日想跟大家分享5個DSE英文作文的final tips，希望可以能幫助DSE應屆考生（當然如果你不是應屆考生，都可以作一個參考）。我知道某些tips的確是老生常談，但即使有十個老師叫你這樣做，直至第十一次，你都很有可能當作耳邊風，所以更加想提醒大家不要因犯下無謂的錯誤而失分！
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- HKDSE 7科5**狀元，包括中英文科均4卷5**，選修科 (Biology, Chemistry, Economics) 分數大幅度拋離5**的最低要求
- 17歲時第一次應考雅思 (IELTS) 便取得滿分9分成績
- 一級榮譽畢業於香港中文大學 (CUHK) 修讀環球商業學 (Global Business Studies)，總GPA達3.9/4.0，曾獲得多個獎學金及入選院長嘉許名單
- 曾於多家金融機構及投資銀行實習，尚未畢業已獲大型美資投行聘請為全職投資銀行分析師 (Investment Banking Analyst)
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影片目錄

0:45 審題雖基本卻重要 ( Must know 立場,身份,語境,格式)
2:03 論說文確保100% 清楚立場意思
3:29 題目對論點數量有限制?
4:45 善用題目提示
5:32 首5-10 mins 千萬不要下筆
7:48 一入場就背默!
10:38 必須以主題句開首
12:50 Must Proofread ( suggest 5 mins 寫 ending, 10 mins proofread)

影片目錄Credits to: Sohoku Gamer
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