- Cùng phân tích và thử viết bài Writing Task 2 đề thật dưới đây nhé:
🎯 Đề bài:
In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that this is the responsibility of governments to solve the problem. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Keywords:
- Overweight and unhealthy: thừa cân và không khỏe mạnh
- Government responsibility: trách nhiệm của chính phủ
- Solve the problem: giải quyết vấn đề
Agree or disagree:
Đây là một đề bài điển hình theo dạng Argumentative essay trong Writing Task 2. Trong đề bài này chúng ta nhận thấy rằng có phần “what extent” ở trong câu hỏi. Vì vậy, khi làm bài chúng ta có thể chọn đồng ý, không đồng ý hoặc một lựa chọn cân bằng hơn là đồng ý 1 phần của ý kiến đưa ra và đưa ra ý bổ sung để ý kiến trở nên đúng nhất.
Brainstorming:
Ở bài này chúng ta sẽ đồng ý một phần với ý kiến rằng chính phủ phải có hành động để giảm thiểu tình trạng béo phì ở trẻ em và vai trò của bố mẹ cũng như nhà trường cũng rất cần thiết.
🎯 ESSAY PLAN
Mở bài:
- Câu 1: Đưa ra nhận xét chung về thực trạng béo phì ở trẻ em trong những năm gần đây.
- Câu 2: Khẳng định rằng chúng ta đồng ý một phần với ý kiến của đề bài và đưa ngắn gọn ý cần bổ sung.
Đoạn thân bài 1:
Ở phần này chúng ta nói về việc tại sao chính phủ phải chịu trách nhiệm cho việc trẻ em trở nên thừa cân và có sức khỏe không tốt.
- The government have the duty to raise public awareness of childhood obesity among citizens: Chính phủ có nhiệm vụ phải nâng cao nhận thức của cộng đồng về vấn đề béo phì ở trẻ em.
- The government must take responsibility for the appearance of unhealthy food advertisements on TV and other social media channels: Chính phủ có trách nhiệm cho việc xuất hiện quà nhiều của những quảng đáo đồ ăn không tốt cho sức khỏe trên TV và các phương tiện truyền thông khác.
Đoạn thân bài 2:
Chúng ta nhấn mạnh rằng không chỉ chính phủ mà ngay bản thân nhà trường và gia đình cũng phải chịu trách nhiệm khắc phục tình trạng tiêu cực này.
- Parents need to help their children form a healthy eating habit since young age: Cha mẹ cần giúp con cái họ hình thành những một thói quen ăn uống lành mạnh từ khi còn nhỏ.
- Schools need to educate their students on adopting a healthy and nutritious eating pattern and providing an adequate amount of physical education sessions to prevent obesity: nhà trường cần tập trung hơn vào giáo dục thể chất cho học sinh, thúc đẩy các em vận động để ngăn ngừa béo phì.
Kết bài:
Khẳng định lại rằng tình trạng béo phì ở trẻ em có thể ngăn chặn được nếu có sự kết hợp hành động của chính phủ với gia đình và nhà trường.
🎯 MODEL ESSAY
In recent years, obesity has become one of the most serious health problems among people of all ages, especially children. Although there are people who believe that the government should take the full responsibility to find the solutions for this problem, I would argue that parents and schools also play a vital role in dealing with the issue.
On one hand, there are several effective solutions on this problem that the government should consider. First, the government may conduct official conferences and news on the symptoms and effects of obesity to raise public awareness. By this way, people will be encouraged to have an active, healthy diet and lifestyle. Second, advertisements on foods and drinks that contain high level of sugar and fat should be restricted on TV and other means of mass media. In fact, since 2017, a ban on junk foods and soft drinks advertisement before 9 p.m. has come into effect by the UK.
On the other hand, parents and schools are also responsible for maintaining low level of obesity among their children. One of the main causes that make children overweight and unhealthy is the choice of daily diet by their parents. A healthy nutritional balanced diet is necessary for every children to grow up normally without having any serious diseases. As the lack of physical exercises can also lead to an obese child, an adequate amount of physical education sessions needs to be held weekly by schools for their young students to keep fit and stay healthy.
To conclude, childhood obesity has become a rising issue in modern society, but I strongly believe that it can still be controlled if the government, parents, and schools get together to help our children.
(286 words)
🎯 USED VOCABULARY AND COLLOCATIONS:
- Childhood obesity: béo phì ở trẻ em
- People of all ages: người ở mọi lứa tuổi
- To take the full responsibility: chịu toàn bộ trách nhiệm
- A healthy nutritional balanced diet: chế độ ăn uống lành mạnh và cân bằng dinh dưỡng
- A rising issue: vấn đề nóng
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Day 11: Drive from Colombo to Airport
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