【I think I’m good enough to get a promotion.】
連假後第一天工作日,來聊聊升遷小故事
升不上去到底哪裡出了錯?
以下為 Sonny 老師第一視角撰寫
Sonny老師的翻譯&教學札記
(故事經歷已經當事人同意後分享)
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你知道英文寫作的好壞
可能影響你的職涯甚至人生嗎?
去年有位中階主管來找我求救
他在公司的績效很不錯
工作態度積極、待人客氣和善
但申請了很多次升遷或外派
都屢屢碰壁
他說高階主管全是英語人士
懷疑自己的溝通是不是出了問題
我聽完馬上就跟他說:
可以借我看看你寫的 e-mail 嗎?
不看則已,一看差點昏去(台語)
申請升遷的那篇 e-mail 破綻百出
而且 1️⃣ 第一句就有很大的問題:
I think I’m good enough to get a promotion.
除了信件沒有適當的開頭之外
怎麼會用這麼直接的語氣「要求」升遷呢?
於是我開始跟他講解正式信件
寫作時的原則和概念
請他盡量使用:
This letter is to request a promotion from my current role of ______ to the open role of ______. 這樣的句型和語氣
2️⃣ 第二個比較大的問題
是他雖然有良好的績效和表現
卻沒有具體、量化地描述出來
只寫了:
My excellent performance has increased sales since 2018.
於是我建議他改成:
During the past three years, I have boosted product sales by 12%, trained 15 junior employees, and saved departmental cost by 10%.
用「平行結構」(parallelism) 的方式
把自己成就的細節一一描述出來
3️⃣ 最後,他的信件用 Best 來結尾
稍嫌不夠正式
我建議他改成 Sincerely
向他講解完所有信件細節後
我請他下一封 promotion request 就這樣寫
然後祝他好運
就在上週
我收到了他的感謝信
說成功拿到了外派美國的高階職位
負責面試的主管還跟他說
他的 e-mail 寫得很不錯
這讓我覺得非常開心
果然不好的寫作就像一塊 #絆腳石
好的寫作卻像一塊 #敲門磚
可以幫你開啟無限的機會
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Sonny 老師是台灣浩首席筆譯老師
7 年來,我一路看著老師
如何投入研發心力
打造台灣同學的優質英文寫作課程
老師最近和 Hahow 好學校
合作了「寫作學習計畫」
讓同學到 10/16 23:59 前
都能享 85 折優惠價格
真心大推給想學好英文寫作的你:
https://hahow.in/cr/sonny-eng-writing2
#email真的很重要
#聽說筆譯班的大家都被噹過一波🤫
#不斷注意細節是進步的關鍵
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我們都知道口罩的防護力比疫苗的防護力即使不是「有過之而無不及」至少也是「難分軒輊,同樣重要」!
從台灣群聚感染的確診者來看,絕大多數的群聚是發生在面對面相處或共同生活,而有不佩戴口罩相處的對象,例如:家人或親密接觸者。
反之,確診者帶給社區的群聚感染,案例相對是比較少的,尤其是不明感染源的個案,接觸者匡列之後,陰性的比例還是比較高。
種種現象,讓官員和很多專家,紛紛認為口罩產生的影響力非常大,國人願意高度配合佩戴口罩,也是很重要的防護力來源!
但是畢竟我們沒有做相關的實驗研究。
今天要和各位分享的,是IPA組織和頂尖大學共同在孟加拉所做的一個實驗報告,實驗的結果顯示,口罩的防護力確實很重要。
戴口罩可降低COVID-19病毒傳播率
The Impact of Mask Distribution and Promotion
on Mask Uptake and COVID-19 in Bangladesh
(IPA創新貧困行動 https://reurl.cc/2or2MO)
越來越多科學證據顯示口罩可以預防Covid-19,但在現實生活中不確實或不長期配戴口罩的個體行為造成口罩的功效無法被證實。
IPA組織、耶魯大學和史丹佛大學共同合作,在孟加拉600個村莊設計推廣並發放口罩,同時評估社區戴口罩對Covid-19防疫的影響:
結論發現整體上,口罩推廣措施促使每一百人中有29人戴口罩,並減少9% Covid-19 有症狀的確診數。
外科口罩在阻斷有症狀的Covid-19傳播上特別有效,並將 60 歲以上群組的有症狀確診數減少 35%。
在接受口罩推廣導入的村莊中(實驗組),口罩使用率增加 29% (從對比村落的 13% 增加到實驗村落的 42%)。清真寺的口罩使用量增加最多(37%)。
Overall, the core intervention induced 29 out of every 100 people to wear masks, increased physical distancing and reduced the number of people with symptomatic SARS-CoV-2 infections by 9 percent. Surgical masks were especially effective in reducing symptomatic SARS-CoV-2 infections and reduced symptomatic infections in people 60+ by 35 percent.
In villages that received the intervention, mask use increased by 29 percentage points (from 13 percent in the comparison villages to 42 percent in treatment villages). Mask use increased most in mosques (37 percentage points). A pilot and our scale-up activities suggest that in-person public reinforcement is a critical part of the intervention.
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Alhamdulillah. YB Fuziah (Kak Gee) who attended the PH - Minister Tengku Datuk Seri Utama Zafrul meeting today, informed me that MOF is keen to produce a Gender Responsive Budget (GRB) with Environmental, Social and Governance (ESG) elements for the upcoming budget. If truly realised, it would be a positive step towards addressing gender equality, and future proofing Malaysia. She also informed me that Minister DS Tengku Zafrul showed interests in MPI as a tool.
KEADILAN MPs have been working hard on these matters as part of our pre-budget preparations led by Wong Chen.
Thank you very much for the stellar work done, Ale, Wong Chen’s officer - for collating all the written suggestions and recommendations over the many pre-councils between KEADILAN MPs.
Having completed our MPI survey, led by Professor Fatimah Kari & her team, local enumerators and our ground office - culminating in a finalised report on measuring the different dimensions of poverty (six conventional & 3 COVID-19 related) in Permatang Pauh, -it brings me pleasure to have my colleagues champion a more progressive and future proof measurement of poverty & its alleviation in the upcoming Budget and 12th Malaysia Plan.
Our office finalised a few recommendations to the MOF - specifically seeking an MPI centred approach to poverty eradication; and adoption of gender responsive measures in the dispensing of our national budget. The findings through our MPI survey confirmed that women headed households are in deeper financial crisis in comparison to conventional households - with a concerning intergenerational lack of social and educational mobility and increased food poverty amongst children.
As such - our national budget must be responsive to gender - a principle that carries through to the point of implementation. Since MOF limited reps to three from each party; I urged that YB Fuziah be included together with Wong Chen and our SecGen. Kak Gee (YB Fuziah) has been a long time advocate of gender responsive budgeting and together — the three of them also stressed the need for Malaysia to achieve the SDGs - specifically the 5th, in tandem with a more realistic measurement of poverty.
As for me; the task of briefing Minister Dato’ Seri Mustapa Mohamed on our completed MPI survey & our discussion on the key highlights to be raised during our 12th Malaysia Plan RTM session tomorrow night gave me some hope - of a new dawn in poverty eradication - if not necessarily, new politics 😅 Cautiously optimistic, bak kata Uncle Wong Chen.
Much to do - waver, we mustn’t.
Please note we are planning the launch of our MPI report. Join us as the date nears #Parlimen!
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Hello!
Thanks for stopping by.
I am sure most of you have watched countless sourdough videos available out there, and most are mix by hand tutorials.
If you find joy in touching your dough and don’t mind the mess, well, good for you ??
But if you prefer a no-fuss and less messy way without compromising the end result, this recipe is for you!
See, I am impatient. I work a mentally demanding full time job, and when I make sourdough, I don’t like to fuss over them.
Normally, I maximise my yield for each batch by making 4-6 (sometimes 8!) loaves of sourdough, because making 1 or 10 loaves to me takes the same amount of preparation and effort.
Anyway, here’s the recipe.
Enjoy!
Ingredients:
300g Bob’s Artisan Bread Flour (or any high protein bread flour, at least 12-13% protein)
65g starter (tripled, use at peak)
233g water (room temperature)
6g Pink Himalayan Salt (or regular salt)
Method:
1. Autolyse 30 minutes
2. Add starter, mix, wait 15 minutes (I sometimes add salt together with starter when I am not in the mood and still get great results)
3. Add salt, mix, wait 15 minutes
4. Transfer to a bulking dish
5. Coil fold x 1
6. Coil fold x 2
7. Coil fold x 3
8. Coil fold x 4 - skip this step if your dough is strong
9. Leave to bulk
10. Total bulk 4 hours at 28C
11. Final shape
12. Cold retard overnight at 3C - make sure your fridge temperature no more than 3C!
13. Preheat oven at 250C, fan mode, for 1 hour
14. Bake at 250C, fan mode, for 35 minutes, lid close
15. And 250C, fan mode, for 5 minutes, lid off
16. Let bread cool completely before cutting, at least 1 hour
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#sourdough #opencrumb #sourdoughbread
Notes:
Always begin with a strong and healthy starter.
Make sure your dough has increased 50% in size.
As beginners, I know it is very hard to determine if your dough has finished its bulk fermentation based on the look and feel, due to the lack of experience. I know that feeling very well, because I was once that lost, clueless beginner myself.
After tinkering with sourdough for about a year, I have come up with a rough timing guide for bulk fermentation based on room/kitchen temperature, well, sort of like a cheat sheet, so you can get the hang of sourdough bread making and get good results every time.
Remember, bulk fermentation starts when starter is mixed into the dough.
Hope this helps!
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23C = 6 1/2 hours
24C = 6 hours
25C = 5 1/2 hours
26C = 5 hours
27C = 4 1/2 hours
28C = 4 hours
29C = 3 1/2 hours
30C = 3 hours
31C = 2 1/2 hours
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Instagram:
Personal // https://instagram.com/puterijessica
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Sourdough // https://instagram.com/thefoodprojectmy
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Purchase Links:
Bob’s Artisan Bread Flour // https://www.amazon.com/Bobs-Red-Mill-Artisan-Ounces/dp/B019IKHF3M
Pink Himalayan Salt // https://www.amazon.com/HQOExpress-Organic-Pink-Himalayan-Salt/dp/B07QQL7VHP/ref=mp_s_a_1_6?dchild=1&keywords=himalayan+pink+salt&qid=1623762046&sr=8-6
Tanita Kitchen Scale // https://www.amazon.com/TANITA-Tonita-digital-cooking-KD-321/dp/B002WBTFDI
Tanita Room Thermometer // https://www.amazon.co.jp/-/en/Tanita-Thermometer-Humidity-Digital-Tabletop/dp/B010CK4Z9Y
Ikea Foljsam Bulking Dish // https://www.amazon.com/IKEA-503-112-69-Följsam-Clear-Glass/dp/B07L4L1YQC/ref=mp_s_a_1_3?dchild=1&keywords=ikea+foljsam&qid=1623762611&sr=8-3
Bread Banneton // https://www.amazon.co.uk/Banneton-Brotform-Rising-Proofing-Proving/dp/B01CCLAPQS
Bread Lame // https://www.amazon.com/UPKOCH-Wooden-Slashing-Plastic-Protective/dp/B081YNTM23/ref=mp_s_a_1_35?dchild=1&keywords=bread+lame&qid=1623930160&sr=8-35
Kuhn Rikon Bread Knife // https://www.amazon.com/Kuhn-Rikon-FBA_23505-Bread-Knife/dp/B009DOAINS
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Equipment Used:
Camera // iPhone XS Max
Mic // Shure MV88
Video Editing // InShot Pro
Audio Editing // Cubase Pro 10.5
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Music Credits:
Music by frumhere - the broken heart gang - https://thmatc.co/?l=23888EC7
Intro Music:
Music: Intro
Musician: Jeff Kaale
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