花博絮語:從不請專業口譯到官網文宣菜英文——臺中宣言
花博又「花現」問題!
(「花現GNP」是花博宣傳口號 XD)
談談臺中市府官網宣傳《臺中宣言》的英文標題,見圖。
原版:累贅、不像樣的的台式菜英文:
《Taichung Declaration》has redefined the GNP Promote and raise the proposal for Green, Nature and People
設法順著原標題想表達的意思改成及格的英文:
The Taichung Declaration has redefined the pursuit of GNP growth in a new proposal of Green, Nature, and People
英文雖然對了,但仍累贅,沒有標題的樣子。
再改,使其精簡易懂,有標題樣:
The Taichung Declaration redefines GNP as Green, Nature, and People
最後這標題比較令人滿意,簡明、有重點、有哏。
* 重點明確:臺中宣言提出GNP新定義
* 明示GNP所代表的新名,但細節賣關子
* 藉此吸引讀者閱讀內文一探究竟
原標題在文法、寫作上的問題:
* 英文不存在中文新式書名號《……》
* 亂用動詞原形raise,不合文法
* 「GNP Promote」是啥?看似想表達「GNP提升」、「提升GNP」?就算視爲一個方案名,這也是糟糕的台式英文,正如Taiwan(,) Touch Your Heart 給人的感覺,無法端上國際。
問題出在把不合文法的動詞原形 promote、touch 一路用到底,不管意思如何,這顯示英語尚在牙牙學語階段,尚無動詞變化的意識和能力。
爲何 GNP Promote 是菜英文?進一步佐證:
請上 Google 搜索 "GNP Promote" (記得加英文引號),出現百餘條結果,清一色與「臺中宣言」有關,細查其實皆出自同一則臺中政府官方英文新聞文章,即本文探討的文章標題。難道「提升GNP」這概念在全人類有英語記錄的歷史中,是臺中市府首推?當然不!更合理的推論是:
一、像樣的英文不是這樣寫。
二、不像樣的這個英文表達,在全宇宙為臺中市府獨創。
這篇文宣,判斷又是不重視翻譯專業的結果。其實,有待批評的英文書寫問題還多著,有興趣的讀者不妨一讀,親自感受一下。
正如不久前逢甲大學一位外國英語教授針對「英語列爲第二官方語言」的計畫投書賴院長,批評這做法是緣木求魚,我也認爲台灣政府各層級應該檢討是否真已準備好,有能力拿出像樣的對內、對外的英語書寫。答案好像不證自明。
以下轉錄臺中官網全文,先是介紹何謂臺中宣言,後是臺中宣言英文版。(連結見留言)
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《Taichung Declaration》has redefined the GNP Promote and raise the proposal for Green, Nature and People
Issued by Information Bureau Date:2018-04-19
Taichung will conduct World Flora Expo in November. Green productivity proposed by the City Government was based on the Flora Expo addressed concepts of Green productivity, Nature sustainability and People with Green-ability.「Taichung Declaration」is aiming for inviting 100 cities to sign up. Taichung City Mayor, Chia-lung Lin has signed the declaration with Changwon City Mayor, Ahn Sang-soo tonight at Masan Baseball Stadium in South Korea, he also kicked off the starting game for the Taiwanese baseball pitcher, Weichung Wang, who is working currently in South Korea. It’s very meaningful to have Changwon City as the first city to sign up to the Taichung Declaration.
The theme of 2018 Taichung World Flora Expo is「Exploring GNP」 which change the old meaning of GNP as Gross National Product. Redefined GNP now means Green productivity, Nature sustainability and People with Green-ability for pursuing green productivity and facilitating the ecological eternity and embrace the nature in addition to pursuing the technological development. to make people’s living better. We wish to promote and raise the awareness of enhanced collaborations between international societies because this is the only way to connect people to help each other for sharing the goodness and prosperity for the world. (4/11*11)*Information Bureau.
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Taichung Declaration:
《Taichung Declaration》
A New Proposal for GNP
Have you ever thought about that, sound of blooming, could be heard?
Modern people are busy in earning their livings when they are pursuing the development of economics and technologies. They’ve been too busy to see things through so they’ve forgotten to listen to the hearts, realize the nature how close they are relying on the environment.
In 2018, let’s find out the balance for ourselves, let’s listen to the whispers of the nature, let’s listen to the happy sounds of the blooming, we can feel the the value of life and how great to be alive. After all, the meaning of life is to make the world better.
2018 Taichung World Flora Expo will raise a new proposal for GNP. GNP has it’s own life and means Green, Nature and People so it is no more a neutral number of Gross National Product. GNP stands for green productivity and facilitating the ecological eternity to make people’s living better.
It’s the time to move forwards, it’s the time to look back to the past. When we move forwards to develop the smart technologies in the future, we should remember to turn to embrace the nature again to facilitate the ecological eternity. We believe the prosperity and environmental protection can exist concurrently while the technologies can live with the nature.
Green Productivity
City in green and green in the city. The economical growth traded off by the environment will no more last as we know quite well how to play the role as one of the members in the global village. By applying green technologies, reducing energy consumption and create the shared resources to construct a sustainable city with green production and green economics as the backbone.
Nature Sustainability
The mountain geography left from the ice age and the recent wetland scenes formed by the waves and tides are all the low polluted ecological environment and diverse biological systems we would like to sustain. We will never pay the price of nature to pursue the technological prosperity again. We will rebuild the tight connections between people and nature to find back the harmony and balance between people and nature.
People with Green-ability
We are anticipating people will develop their green concepts and capabilities. Such trivial things as personal thought, diet, living and action or big scope as urban construction and future development, all of them will become the group energy of Green to contribute to the international society. So-called green concepts is to implement the actions, including respect the varieties and embrace diversity. No matter in the aspects of culture, race, politics, education or religion, we will maintain the old traditions and develop the innovations to share a better future with everyone. The aesthetics of living is to live with varieties and grow with the compatibilities.
We believe,
The perfect balance among production, ecology and living can be obtained.
Listen to the nature, connect with the society and link to the world.
Collaborate and facilitate the development of international non-government organizations.
Create the new model of urban management.
Because we connect with each other,
We will share the achievements and good results.
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今天小花生幼兒園畢業典禮。我們家長準備了孩子從小到大的照片,由學校做成投影,送給孩子們一個驚喜的禮物。播放影片時搭配這首歌曲,我邊聽,邊看著所有班上孩子們從小到大的照片,眼淚就不停的流。
回家就想著分享這首歌曲給你們。上網似乎找不到有中文翻譯的歌詞,於是我來翻譯一下,分享與你。
Let Them Be Little 讓他/她們做個小孩
詞曲: Richie McDonald/Billy Dean
I can remember when you fit in the palm of my hand
我還記得你可以讓我捧在手掌心的時候
Felt so good in it, no bigger than a minute
那時候你才剛出生一分鐘,在我手掌心裡的感覺是多麼的美好
How it amazes me, you're changing with every blink
讓我驚訝的是,每當我一眨眼,你就長大了
Faster than a flower blooms they grow up all too soon
長得比花開的速度還快,像花一樣,孩子們長大的太快了
So let them be little 'cause they're only that way for a while
所以讓他們做個小孩,因為他們童年時間是那麼的短
Give them hope, give them praise, give them love every day
給他們希望,給他們讚美,每天給他們愛
Let them cry, let them giggle, let them sleep in the middle
讓他們哭,讓他們笑,讓他們睡在你們的中間
Oh just let them be little
喔!就讓他們做個小孩
I've never felt so much in one little tender touch
我從來沒有因為被一個小手觸摸而如此感動
I live for those kisses, prayers and your wishes
我為你的吻、你的祈禱和希望而生存
Now that you're teaching me things only a child can see
你教會了我只有小孩能夠看得到的東西
Every night while we're on our knees all I ask is please
每天晚上我祈禱時,我總是這樣的請求著
Let them be little 'cause they're only that way for a while
讓他們做個小孩,因為童年的時間是那麼的短
Give them hope, give them praise, give them love every day
給他們希望,給他們讚美,每天給他們愛
Let them cry, let them giggle, let them sleep in the middle
讓他們哭,讓他們笑,讓他們睡在你們的中間
Oh just let them be little
喔!就讓他們做個小孩
So innocent, a precious soul, you turn around
這麼純真,珍貴的靈魂,當你一轉身,
It's time to let them go
竟然就到了放手的時間
So let them be little 'cause they're only that way for a while
所以讓他們做個小孩,因為他們童年時間是那麼的短
Give them hope, give them praise, give them love every day
給他們希望,給他們讚美,每天給他們愛
Let them cry, let them giggle, let them sleep in the middle
讓他們哭,讓他們笑,讓他們睡在你們的中間
Oh just let them be little
喔!就讓他們做個小孩
Let them be little
讓他們做個小孩
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這次的紐約行將離開孩子們兩個星期,心裡亦是喜亦是憂。
從沒想過生完兩胎後的我還能繼續模特兒旅行的工作,雖說還是有接工作沒中斷過,但,能再回歸國際模特兒飛來飛去的工作軌道上就少了。
為了孩子們,曾經一度想放棄自己的這個夢想,專心的當媽媽這個角色,因為畢竟孩子的成長只有一次,能一直陪伴在他們身邊快樂成長,教育他們中文、生活作息、品德教育,這真的是用錢也買不到的。很多法國媽媽都羨慕我跟強的時間能自由掌控,不需要每天工作,能有時間陪伴孩子,但,恕不知,模特兒的工作本來就是可有可無,變化無常,好可以很好,1、2年不愁吃穿,差時也會很差,所以存款要夠足,要懂得未雨綢繆,要懂得抓時間學習提升自己。
而強,國際經紀人的角色就像是保姆一樣的照顧所有的模特兒,一下跟亞洲聯絡、一下跟歐洲電話會議、一下跟美洲email、一下跟模特視訊溝通,我都要擔心他沒時間能照顧自己的孩子們。
而且帶孩子就像7-11一樣的全年無休,不過為了愛、為了孩子的教育,什麼都願意犧牲。但,說實話,我多希望工作能多一點,不求多,因為一多就沒辦法陪伴他們!人啊!真的不能貪!魚與熊掌不可兼得,昨兒個還因為不能陪她們過復活節,只能買巧克力送他們而憂鬱了一下,但內心深處還是雀躍不已的覺得能再出去闖一闖,偶爾的透透氣,偶爾享受自己一個人的孤獨感,偶爾享受沒有孩子在身邊的思念感。偶爾享受所謂的「單身快樂」!!
而且我還是好愛這份國際模特兒工作,好愛這樣飛來飛去,也許跟從小被愛拍照的媽媽訓練當小花童、小模特兒時就開始愛上這份工作。
現在能獨自一人在紐約,就希望用工作填滿自己!這次能再次出征,真的很謝謝還一直相信我的大家、我的家人們、謝謝老公答應好好照顧兒女、我的朋友們 、謝謝我的母公司SCOUTING ONE By Jon Viatge一直相信我、謝謝紐約、邁阿密的公司 @Wilhelmina models、謝謝 @lowenstudio,謝謝你們的鼓勵與支持,我還是會繼續自己的夢,也期待下一個夢想實現!
就讓我一直活在夢里吧!別叫醒我!
This New York trip will leave the children for two weeks, and my heart is also happy and also worried.
I never thought I could continue my modelling trip after I had finished two births. I could return to the work of flying around to do this international modeling. For the children, I once wanted to give up my dream and concentrate on being a mother. This role, because after all, children grow up only once, it’s good can always accompany them to grow up, educate them speak Chinese, to live and education them by myself. This is really not changable with money.
Many French mothers admire me for being able to grow up with them with such freedom times. I do not need to work every day and have time to accompany children. However, the modeling job is dispensable and volatile. it can be very good don’t need to worry for 1 or 2 years. but when the time is not good, you must have deposits to know how to take precautions. You must take time to learn something and improve yourself.
As Jon , his international agent role is like a nanny who taking care of all the models. He talks to Asia, talks to the European for conference call, talks to the Americans, and communicates with the models. I have to worry that he doesn’t has Time can take care of our children.
And take care children is like 7-11 endless year round, but for love, for children’s education, anything is willing to sacrifice. However, to be honest, I mostly hope that my work can be a bit more, I can occasionally breathe, occasionally enjoy my own loneliness, and occasionally enjoy the feeling of having no children around me. Enjoy the so-called 「single happiness」 occasionally!
And I still love this international model work. Still loving to flies everywhere. Maybe I love this job because I was trained to be a flower girl and a little model when I was young.
This time I can go out again and I really appreciate it. I have you all who always believed in me, my families, my husband promised to take good care of children, my friends, my mother agency, SCOUTING ONE By Jon Viatge still believe in me, and thank you New York and Miami Wilhelmina Models give me working visa, let’s rock!!!! and Lowen Studio for your encouragement and support, I will continue my dream and I look forward to the next dream!
Just Let me live in the dreams!!
Don’t wake me up!
never grow up中文 在 CH Music Channel Youtube 的最佳貼文
《夜の国》
トリル / Trill / 顫音
作詞 / Lyricist:aimerrhythm
作曲 / Composer:飛内将大
編曲 / Arranger:飛内将大、 玉井健二
歌 / Singer:Aimer
翻譯:CH(CH Music Channel)
意譯:CH(CH Music Channel)
English Translation: Genius Lyrics
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中文翻譯 / Chinese Translation :
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英文翻譯 / English Translation :
https://genius.com/Genius-english-translations-aimer-trill-english-translation-lyrics
日文歌詞 / Japanese Lyrics :
かすれた声のまま 消えた君は帰らないから
冷たい夜空のよう 闇の中 滲んでゆくこと
散らかったおもちゃや 吐き捨てたどろんこさえも
美しく輝く星屑を探してたんだね?
ミッドナイトにカスタネットを どうかするくらい鳴らして
It’s all rightとか いっそcryとか どうかしてるから言わないで
10日前から こんな毎日 過ごした程度で怖がって
Only oneのLonely night 眠れないまま
揺れるトレモロのように囁く言葉が
失くした記憶の灯火を そっと胸の奥で揺らめかせて
平気なんて嘘ばかりで
君は幻の翼で空に浮かんで 得意げな顔でおどける
ふいにふりしぼる その笑顔が さよならの合図なんだと わかっていた
明日になれば また この空は違って見えるかな?
大人になれば ただ 目を閉じて眠ってしまうかな?
繋がれた鎖や せわしない時計の針が
美しく輝く星屑を連れて行くんだね
交差点から高架線まで いっそライトは消し去って
It’s all rightとか いっそcryとか どうかしてるから言わないで
通り過ぎてく こんな毎日 過ごしてばっかじゃ ダメだって
Only oneのLonely night 聞こえてるかな?
君は瞬きと共に過ぎてく時間も 遠くから見てると微笑んで
夜がつきつける その明日を あの日見た絵本のように 愛していて
揺れるトレモロの夜にきらめく雫が 集めた奇跡を音にして
ずっと憧れてた 夢見ていた おやすみの合図のように
そして 思い出は二人の音を結んで 途切れないトリル奏でる
夜がつきつける その明日を あの日見た絵本のように
君を打ちつける その涙も 朝を待つ世界のように 愛していて
愛していて
中文歌詞 / Chinese Lyrics :
就算用嘶啞的聲音叫喊,但早已離去的你也回不來了啊
猶如冰冷刺骨的夜晚,漸漸滲入黑夜的死寂
但不論是四處散落的玩具,亦或被吐出口的泥濘
也曾探尋著美麗又璀璨生輝的星塵吧?
午夜時分的響板們啊,請盡你們所能地響徹鳴奏吧
「已經沒事了」、「盡情哭泣吧」,讓人難受就請別再說了
自十天前開始,每日都如此虛度光陰令我感到膽怯
在這孤單的無法入睡的夜晚,徹夜未眠
夜裡紛飛著,彷彿震音般的喃喃細語
幾時曾遺落的記憶燈火,靜靜地在這內心深處搖曳渲染
你總是撒下和煦平靜的謊言安撫此心
你展著虛幻的羽翼在空中翱翔,一臉得意地作伴嬉戲
不經意地竭盡哭喊,但我知道的啊,你那強顏歡笑,正是象徵離別的信號
倘若到了明天,還能看見這片不同的天空嗎?
倘若成了大人,閉上雙眼就能夠入眠了嗎?
但緊緊相繫的鎖鏈,亦或急忙奔走的時針
仍會帶著絢麗耀眼的繁星離去吧
自十字路口到高架鐵道,索性將所有光芒都抹去吧
「已經沒事了」、「盡情哭泣吧」,讓人難受就請別再說了
總是如此虛度光陰地度過每一日可不行啊
在這孤單的形單影隻的夜晚,你能聽見嗎?
與你共度的時光轉瞬即逝,但你仍會自遙遠的彼方面帶微笑守望
「哪怕漫漫長夜迎面而來、待至明日,仍將如那一天的繪本所描繪般,深愛著你。」
夜裡搖曳著,滴滴晶瑩剔透、熠熠生輝的震音,猶如匯聚而成的奇蹟樂章
我一直憧憬著、日夜夢著那聲響,聽來彷彿告別夜晚的信號
彼此的回憶令二人的聲音緊緊相繫,響徹永不停歇的顫音合奏
「哪怕漫漫長夜迎面而來、待至明日,仍將如那一天的繪本所描繪般——」
「那簌簌滴落你面頰的淚水,仍將如靜待黎明的世界般——深愛著你。」
「深愛著你。」
英文歌詞 / English Lyrics :
My voice is still hoarse since you disappeared, never to return
Inside darkness resembling a cold night sky, tears blur my eyes
As even within scattered toys and spilled mud, I'm searching
For beautiful, shining pieces of stardust
Somehow I'm able to ring the castanets at midnight
Whether it's all right or whether I'd rather cry, I'll manage somehow, so don't tell me
Ten days ago, the thought of spending, every day like this terrified me
Only one lonely night, I'm still unable to sleep
Like a wavering tremolo, the whispered words
Make forgotten memories, as torches, gently flicker in the depths of my chest
The seeming composure is just a lie
Lifted by wings of fantasy, you float in the sky, joking with an elated expression on your face
That smile in which you put forth your entire heart, somehow, I understood it was a sign of farewell
If tomorrow comes, will this sky look different then, too?
If I grow up, will I be able to fall asleep just by closing my eyes?
The chains linking us together, and the rushing hand of the clock
Are taking away with them the beautifully shining stardust
From the intersection to the overhead train, I'd rather the light wipe it all away
Whether it's all right or whether I'd rather cry, I'll manage somehow, so don't tell me
Though day after day passes, I can't just spend each one like this
Only one lonely night, will you be able to hear me?
You're in the twinkling of the stars as well as the past we shared, watching over me from afar and smiling
"When night confronts you in the coming days, like in those picture books we read back then, I'll always love you"
In the night with a wavering tremolo, the sparkling droplets. Cause the gathered miracles to let out a sound
Forever full of longing, I fell into dreams, as if it were a sign of farewell
Then, our memories tie our sounds together, playing a trill that will never come to an end
"When night confronts you in the coming days, like in the picture books we read back then"
"Even those tears which drip heavily from you now. just like a world waiting for morning, I'll always love all of you"
"I'll always love all of you"
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