今天去評了政大金旋獎,對我來說有一份特殊的意義,記得大學一年級有跟當時學校裡的樂團一起去參賽,當然我乃一屆炮灰,但在我第十年的歌唱生涯中,居然可以來為政大金旋獎做評審工作跟大家分享一些創作與表演的想法,覺得人生真的有好多冥冥注定,不可思議...!
我這邊也簡單提供一些我當時草草寫下的評語,但有一些同學的我沒多做紀錄,因為時間滿短暫的哈哈我有點抱歉~希望能提供給部分同學一些建議跟練習的方向:
/獨唱組/
1 with you 身為第一組算滿穩定,選歌要加強
3 四號病房 戲劇化,但細節不夠明確
4 底細 會唱
5 你給我聽好 細節不夠
7 如果你也聽說 握mic方式不對,律動節奏不好
8 孤單心事
9 我是真的愛你 律動X
10 Sante 沒特色
11 撥接 情緒平,沒細節
13 陌生人 咬字不夠深刻
14 Let it go 選歌太難
15 夜盲症 基本功需加強
16 我完美的愛情 細節可惜,音色good
17 Imma get a new one 選歌不適合比賽
18 流著淚說分手 細節可惜
19 荒唐 細節可惜
20 落葉歸根 音準跑掉了
21 最想到達的地方 音色好聽
22 社會敗類 細節不穩定
23 Song of the Ancients 尾音不行
24 How do you sleep 副歌好聽
26 Voodoo 律動很棒
27 死心了沒有 呼吸控制跟音準危險
28 Runaway 咬字不夠,歌太難
30 Drown 音準細節可惜
31 寫一首歌 下行音準不準(偏高)
32 愛情 音準不行
33 一樣的月光 尾音可惜,可能氣不夠
34 最長的電影 亮眼,細節小心!
35 對你愛不完 細節不行
36 Little house 好聽
37 水星記 起音一直滑
38 太陽 咬字不夠,深刻度不夠
39 消愁 尾音氣不足
40 歌單心事 音準細節不夠
41 When we were young 低音可惜
42 沒離開過 尾音小心
44 末路狂花 口氣有趣但音準不穩
45 來不及 穩定
46 one night in 北京 很會唱京劇喔
47 對的時間點 音準細節不夠
48 阿刁 音準偏高
49 演員 音準偏高,情緒平平
50 天真有邪 音準細節危險
51 你要的愛 音準跟拍子都不行,但音色很酷
53 drag me down 音準細節小危險
54 尋人啟事 不夠深刻
55 太陽
56 A song for you 從容,小不穩
57 繁華攏是夢 油
58 無言花 咬字需加強
59 普通朋友 音準細節需加強
60 她說 深刻感不夠
61 make you feel my love 口氣不錯
62 我還年輕 音準不行,細節不行,呼吸亂
63 暗戀 順暢有情緒
64 我恨我愛你 握mic不對,尾音跟呼吸不好
65 太空人 穩定
66 如果我變成回憶 音準歪,呼吸小歪
67 陪你的貓睡午覺 律動不錯,呼吸小亂
68 Japanese denim 音準小危險
69 異類 直接
70 Last dance 音色特別,呼吸小亂
71 再見 咬字需加強
72 當我想你的時候 細節跟控制力不足
74 小人物 轉音不行
75 Smoke and mirrors 音準細節小心
/重對唱組/
1 迷路在雲端 和聲小不穩,不夠貼
2 迷惘美 律動佳,punch要再大一點
3 愛是懷疑 編很花但是合音不太準
4 思念是一種病 高音合音與bass易飄
5 Sister Sadie 強
6 演員和歌手 音準危險,合音不準也不貼
7 you’ll never know 貼!小不準但好聽
8 過錯 男生不準
10 台北車站 好聽
12 我在那邊唱 定key有點太高
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唱歌的部分今天聽到很多人都是KTV式唱法,就是乍聽之下沒問題,但其實細節不夠,因為大家都已經有一定的程度(水準好高啊),所以越是往雞蛋裡挑骨頭,就越是比細節啊~~提醒大家轉音的使用頻率以及轉音後的尾音算滿關鍵,以及選的歌是否適合自己與適合比賽,也都是重點問題,清唱很容易走音,所以建議大家選擇自己熟悉又拿手的,就算有突發狀況也能自救如此游刃有餘的歌會比較好,以及清唱很容易聽出一個人唱歌的律動感,如果一直死命地唱沒有留空,會讓聽的人更聽不懂。重對唱組的重點就是兩個人都要唱準以外,音色跟共鳴也要互相幫助與融合,阿卡的部分麻煩每一部都要唱準才不會白費大家編的很用心的內容。
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希望大家都能實踐『理直氣壯地把練習的內容展現出來』,今天的表演很精彩,跟廖士賢老師和令晴老師兩位一起評審很開心,聽完很想評創作組啊(喂~)謝謝政大金旋獎!
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#最近一直在當老師好難切換角色
#大家都好會唱喔拜託留給老師一口飯吃好嗎
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同時也有4部Youtube影片,追蹤數超過2萬的網紅KINUKURO,也在其Youtube影片中提到,曲名 Smoke and Mirrors / 原唱+作詞曲 Jayn / 自翻中文歌名 冥昧 / 混音 Yuku / 動畫 喵太 / 插圖 Sura / 填詞+翻唱+縮圖排版 鬼怒川 《Credits 版權資訊》 ●Original Version 作曲/填詞/原唱 - Jayn (Youtube...
smoke and mirrors song 在 文茜的世界周報 Sisy's World News Facebook 的最佳解答
Barbra Streisand :Don’t Lie To Me.
她決定將她對美國當代的現象,她的政治信念,寫進新歌。
2018年,Barbra Streisand released a new, very politically focused song: "Don't Lie to Me."
Sonically, the song is a grand, lush and heavily orchestrated affair that's very much in the spirit of much of her catalog; lyrically, however, Streisand is pointed — and not subtle. "You can build towers of bronze and gold," she sings. "You can make castles in the sky. You can use smoke and mirrors and old cliches ... don't lie to me." In the chorus, she brings it home: "How do you sleep when the world keeps turning? / All that we built has come undone / How do you sleep when the world is burning?"
In an interview published Thursday by Billboard, the singer, songwriter, actress, director and film producer said that she felt that it was time to put her political beliefs into her music. "I've written many articles about this ... this person ... who has no manners, insults everybody, makes fun of disabled people," Billboard quotes her as saying. "I don't know what to say, I've written like 15 Huffington Post pieces ... what else could I think about? It's my protest, in a sense, about this unprecedented time in our history."
*歌詞:
Why can you just tell me the truth?
Hard to believe the things you say
Why can't you feel the tears I cried today, cried today, cried today
How do you win if we all lose?
You change the facts to justify
Your lips move but your words get in the way, in the way, in the way
Kings and Queens, crooks and thieves
You don't see the forest for the trees
Head and heart on our knees
You can't see what we all see
How do you sleep when the world keeps turning?
All that we built has come undone
How do you sleep when the world is burning?
Everyone answers to someone
Don't lie to me, don't lie to me, you lie to me
Don't lie to me, don't lie to me, you lie to me
You can build towers of bronze and gold
You can build castles in the sky
You can use smoke and mirrors, old clichés
Not today, not today
Kings and Queens, crooks and thieves
You don't see the forest for the trees
Hand on heart, down our knees
You can't see what everyone sees
How do you sleep when the world keeps turning?
All that we built has come undone
How do you sleep when the world is burning?
Everyone answers to someone
Don't lie to me, don't lie to me, you lie to me
Don't lie to me, don't lie to me, you lie to me
Can't you see I'm crying?
Can't you see we're crying?
Where's the new horizon?
Where's the new horizon?
How do you sleep?
How do you sleep?
How do you sleep?
(How do you sleep when the world is turning?)
How do you sleep?
(All that we built has come undone)
Enough is enough
(How do you sleep when the world is burning?)
How do you sleep?
(Everyone answers to someone)
Don't lie to me, don't lie to me, you lie to me
Don't lie to me, don't lie to me, you lie to me
Can't you see I'm crying?
(Can't you see we're crying?)
Can't you see we're crying?
Everyone answers to someone
https://www.npr.org/2018/09/27/652138634/barbra-streisand-addresses-trump-in-new-song-don-t-lie-to-me
smoke and mirrors song 在 KINUKURO Youtube 的最讚貼文
曲名 Smoke and Mirrors / 原唱+作詞曲 Jayn / 自翻中文歌名 冥昧 / 混音 Yuku / 動畫 喵太 / 插圖 Sura / 填詞+翻唱+縮圖排版 鬼怒川
《Credits 版權資訊》
●Original Version 作曲/填詞/原唱 - Jayn (Youtube ID: LittleJayneyCakes)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D5KGb...
●Cover Version+Translation 歌詞翻譯/翻唱 - 鬼怒川 (Youtube ID: KINUKURO)
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCs-A...
●Mixing 混音-Yuku (FB ID: Yuku'sMixingStudio)
●Animation 動畫-喵太 (FB ID: @NekoTaLife)
●Storyboard 分鏡-鬼怒川
●Art 美術-Sura
*如需轉載請務必聯繫我,謝謝。
Please do not re-upload or re-edit the song without my permission. Thank you.
《英語注釋》
Smoke and Mirrors原指魔術師用煙霧和鏡子來欺騙眼睛的技法,今可指含混不清的事物
smoke and mirrors song 在 DeluCat 迪鹿 Youtube 的最佳貼文
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• 原曲資訊 Original song by LittleJayneyCakes •
曲 Song : 迷霧幻鏡 (Smoke and Mirrors)
原曲連結Original Link : https://youtu.be/D5KGbxNTDB8
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• 翻唱 Vocal Cover - 迪鹿DeluCat(我) •
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• 人聲混音 - Yuku Man •
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• 繪師 - 野生部長 •
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• OFF Vocal / 純音樂伴奏 / ニコカラ / カラオケ •
伴奏至原作者Google Play購買
✧Instrumental: https://fanlink.to/Ra
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• 歌詞 Lyrics •
中文版填詞:迪鹿 Delucat
我不敢想 與你親近
我總遙望著你的 迷霧幻鏡
親愛的別吼 請安靜
你不可能沒 發現到
這腐朽崩壞的秘密
為何要玩弄我感情
你知道 我以為她很 喜歡你
她只是婊子不懂嗎
她說她愛你是撒謊
她只會傷害你的心
我會 救 你…
( 間奏 )
你說我是你 的知己
也說過或許長大就 在一起
這些話顯得 太溫熱
我一直傻傻 期待著
直到那小偷的現身
看來如何?
你真的覺得 我做過火了嗎
別再喚她名
當我的玩伴 或許她今晚能平安
我會 愛 你
我不 需要更多 只要你最愛我
不許有人比我重要 快!說你屬於我
緊緊握住 我的雙手 說我是你所求
除了你我一無所有 快!說你最愛我
今晚 如果 說謊
這女孩將會 死 亡
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很抱歉剛剛失態了
如你所見 我現在 非常忙的
你手機有她的號碼
把她約進這陷阱吧
我們 就能好好談話 (大概吧)
看來如何?
你真的覺得 我做過火了嗎
只要你發誓 你沒有撒謊
我馬上會 將她釋放
我會 愛 你
(間奏)
我不能再 沉迷下去
我默默看著 你的謊 與騙局
我知道你 也很憂慮
你陷入她 的迷惑中
我會親手 將你解脫
我不 要求更多 只要你最愛我
不許有人比我 重要 快!說你屬於我
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緊緊握住 我的雙手 說我是你所求
除了你我一無所有 快!說你最愛我
快點 快點來吧 有問題嗎 別哭啦
那些她都不能給你 親愛的!別懷疑
我會給你 我的身心 對!把它們都 給予你
要是你不願意接受 你會後悔不已
我懂 這很 荒唐 但你卻使我癡狂
如果你不願擔當 這女孩將會 死亡
(( ★中文填詞想翻唱,可自由取用,但得註明填詞者,與來源影片網址!))
smoke and mirrors song 在 OMJamie Youtube 的精選貼文
Acoustic Violin Cover of "BELIEVER" (original by Imagine dragons)
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